Sean Paul Murphy, Writer

Sean Paul Murphy, Writer
Sean Paul Murphy, Storyteller

Tuesday, August 31, 2010

"An Italian Restaurant Tragedy"

Baltimore's Little Italy

Did you ever have a project where everything went wrong?  I did.  And I call it "The Italian Restaurant Tragedy."


CENSORED!


I have decided to pull the original text of this blog because word reached me through the grapevine that one of the producers on this project, a romantic comedy about the founding of one of the most famous restaurants in Little Italy, who I had no desire to offend was very displeased by it.  My apologies.

And, sadly, I don't know if the people I wanted to offend had even bothered to read it.

Oh well.

Prior to publishing the original blog, I sent it to director Lee Bonner, who, aside from co-writing the script, was slated to direct the ill-fated project.  He strongly advised me against publishing it.  I also sent it Matt Richards, who, had the stars aligned properly, would have produced the film.  He said he laughed out loud reading it.  That was all I needed to hear.   But it was a mistake.  The blog was simply too bitter and mean-spirited even by my standards.

I included the story because my blog had been taking on a rather rosy tone, as if everything I touched turned to gold.  I was hoping this tale, about a film that had three excellent chances of being made, would act as a counter balance.  I also wanted to use it as a cautionary tale for my fellow screenwriters.  I made a number of mistakes while I was working on this project.  I have learned from them. I was hoping others would as well.

Here are a few of them:

1).  Don't get involved on a project on spec unless you will own your script outright when you walk away.  I was screwed in this case because the script was based on a self-published book and a true life story.  I could, of course, change the names and some of the details but why bother?

2).  Don't get involved with a true story unless the real people have signed away their life rights.  Run, don't walk, to the nearest exit if one of real people insists on maintaining script approval.  I have talked to other writers who have gotten into the same mess.  It never ends well.  You soon discover that, frankly, most of these real people will ultimately be unable to surrender their lives.  They will keep endlessly revising, and, in this case, turning down deals, until things are perfect. And they never will be.  In the end, most of them would rather talk about making a movie than actually make one.

3).  Make sure everyone is in the small ballpark expectation wise.  I think one of the reasons this film failed was because the real person saw herself as the heroine of a $60,000,000 Paramount picture.  The director had a more realistic attitude.  He saw it as a smallish indy film that would have to kill at the film festivals in order to have a shot.  I, the eternal optimist, hoped for the best but I knew ultimately its best shot was on cable.

4).  Don't stake your professional reputation on the actions of amateurs.  If you want to make movies for a living, work with people who make movies for a living.  I have no doubt in my mind that this film would have been made if Lee and I, or Matt, were allowed I to call the shots.  I have subsequently made a number of films.  I have found funding for a number of films.  I could have found a home for this film too.

5).  Finally, and most importantly:  Don't ever work for a producer for free -- no matter how "real" the project seems to be.  If it were a real project, they could afford to pay you.  Remember, if a producer pays nothing for a script, it is worth nothing.  Period.  End of story.  If you don't believe me, listen to the famous sci-fi writer Harlan Ellison:


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Thursday, August 12, 2010

"I Will Not"

Director David Butler with Cinematographer Regis Becker

Ever have a project where everything went perfectly?  I did.  It was called "I Will Not."

Here's how it happened.

For years, David Butler and I have been considering the possibility of entering the 48 Hour Film Festival.

The premise of the festival is that each team has to write, shoot, edit and mix, a short film within forty-eight hours.  The contest begins at 5pm Friday and the films have to be delivered by 5pm Sunday.  The best film wins.  To make sure you don't cheat, you have to draw a genre out of a hat and include a common prop and line of dialogue into your film.  It was intriguing.  We considered it twice before, but we were too busy with pay work to do it.  Finally, in 2006, we decided we had to do it.

David had all the resources:  lights, cameras, editing equipment and the good will of Baltimore's talented cast and crew.  He also had that powerhouse Lynda Meier on staff as a producer.  When the decision was made to enter the film festival. David and Lynda got on the ball immediately.  First, they assembled a kind crew that would be willing to give up a Saturday for free.  (The rules state that you can't pay anyone to work on the film.)  They also assembled a cast.  That was a little more difficult since we had no idea what kind of movie we were going to make:  drama, comedy, musical, western, martial arts, action, horror, etc.  So, working with actor Matt Ryb, they assembled a varied team of actors and actresses which they hoped would fill any need.  David and Lynda also acquired a number of locations, homes, offices, etc., that they felt should fulfill any need.

The weekend before the shoot, David and I tried to cheat.  We tried to think of a few scenarios that would work across genre lines, but we quickly gave up.  There were too many genres and variables.  We would have to play it straight and a week later we found ourselves at the starting line with representatives of all the participating teams in the Baltimore area at a bar of the Cafe Hon in Hampden waiting to receive our genres.  Between the two of us,  Dave and I knew a number of the participants.  The mood was one of equal excitement and dread.  There was much fear among teams about being the poor SOB who drew the western genre out of the hat.  Baltimore really doesn't lend itself to westerns.  And it was little comfort to hear that, if you drew western, you could do a musical instead.

David and I were nervous too.  Or, at least I was.  I felt we had to win.  We were both professional filmmakers.  It would look really bad if we lost to some high school kids from Parkville.  Lynda kept saying that it was all about the challenge and the fun, but I felt there was more on the line than that.  I am not really competitive by nature.  I don't always have to win.  However, I do not like to lose.

The time for the drawing came.  David put his hand into the hat and pulled out Detective/Cop film.  I didn't have a cop film in mind, but at least it wasn't the dreaded western genre.  (I don't think the team that drew the western genre finished their film in time.)

Three items also needed to be included in the film:  a character named Joe or Joanne Murphy, who was a Phys-Ed Instructor; a prop, medicine; and the line of dialogue, "Just give her some time to figure it out."   Immediately. David was on the phone with Lynda rallying the troops.  Now all we needed was a script.  One thing was for sure.  Our hero was going to be a detective, not a beat cop.  Where were we going to come up with all those police uniforms by the time we had to shoot the next morning!

David and I brainstormed some ideas on the way from Baltimore back to Butler Films' base camp in Annapolis, MD.  Nothing stuck until I remembered something the lovely star of my second feature, Tracy Melchior, had told me about her SWAT team husband.  She could never bring him to Hollywood parties because if he saw someone do something illegal, i.e., take drugs, he would arrest him.  Aha!  That was our story.  It would be about a detective who was unlucky in love because he would end arresting each girl he dated for some minor offense.  His reputation becomes so notorious that some of his co-workers bet him that he will arrest the girl he is about to go out with on a blind date.  Our detective takes the bet, not realizing how difficult it would be not to arrest this girl!

By around ten or eleven, the script was done and David and Lynda were casting the film and lining up the locations.  There couldn't be many.  We had a large crew and couldn't waste much time making company moves.  The talented Matt Ryb got the role of the hapless detective, and, in a surprise move, David and Lynda cast Sarah Brandes, as the inappropriate blind date.  I say surprising because Sarah is primarily known as a crew person in the props and sets department.  Everyone was buzzing with activity.  Locations were being secured.  Equipment obtained.  Wardrobe acquired.    

Then I enjoyed a rare luxury.  I got to go home and sleep.  The rest of the production team would be working through the night before catching a few winks on the floors and sofas of Butler Films.  However, I would soon return to duty.  In addition to writing the film, I would also be editing it.

The next morning I reported to duty in Baltimore at the advertising agency GKV, which kindly offered their offices to us for use in the film.  We used their accounting department as our detectives' office, and we used their lobby as our restaurant.  The props and sets people did a great job.  If you pay close attention you might find yours truly on one of the wanted posters hanging on the walls.

Keep in mind everything had been done the night before.

Another fun thing about the job was that I had the opportunity to get my wife and her friend Xuan in the act as extras during the restaurant scene.  Unfortunately, they left the building during a break and couldn't re-enter since the doors were locked.  After about an hour or so I began to wonder what happened to my lovely bride and began to search for her.  (Neither she or Xuan had a cellphone on them.)  I eventually found them, and, although they did not enjoy being locked out, the experience did not sour them on the motion picture business.

I didn't have much opportunity to watch the shoot.  I was assigned to a cubicle to transfer the high-definition footage from the P2 cards from our two Panasonic cameras to our hard drives, and, if possible, begin editing on location.  I didn't get the opportunity to start the edit on the set.  By the time I transferred one card, the next one was ready.  I actually stayed at GKV working while David and the crew went and shot the exteriors at a nearby location.  When they left to shoot the home footage, I went to Annapolis to begin the edit

The clock was definitely clicking loudly by the time we began editing in earnest around 7pm.  We had two cameras rolling on every shot so we had a ton of footage to work our way through.  There wasn't much time for soul-searching.  If a take worked, we didn't second guess it.  Once a large chunk of the film was completed, David began color correcting it on another computer.  I think the picture edit ended around 4am Sunday morning.   Rather than crash on the floor, I opted to drive back to my home.  That was probably a mistake.  I know I was weaving a bit.  But I survived.  So did the car.

After a couple brief hours of sleep, I was up and ready for the sound mix.  Andrew Eppig at Clean Cuts had volunteered to mix our film.  Dave, Lynda and our cinematographer Regis Becker were already at Clean Cuts when I arrived.  I was unsure whether Dave and Lynda had slept at all, but I know Rege caught a catnap or two during the edit.  I'm not putting him down.  His willingness to stay through the edit and the sound mix proved his devotion to the project!  Andrew did a great job with the mix, helped in no small part by the wonderful location sound provided by Rick Angelella, the dean of Baltimore soundmen.  The film kept getting better and better, but the clock kept ticking and ticking.  Before long, we had to stop work and rush the film back to Hampden to turn it in.

The mood was somewhat euphoric.  Not just for us but for all the teams that gathered to turn in their films.  It is quite an accomplishment to write, shoot, edit and mix a coherent film in forty-eight hours.  I, for one,  no longer cared if we won or lost.  However, I thought we had a good chance!

The films were screened a couple days later at the Baltimore Museum of Art.  The audience was filled with filmmakers and their friends.  Practically all of our cast and crew came to the screening.  Then the lights went down.  I was frankly quite surprised how good most of the films were.  However, I believe it was the work of Andrew Eppig and Rick Angelella which gave us the edge.  Most of the other films looked good, but suffered from poor audio.  Often times I could not even make out the dialogue in some films.  That was a pity.

Then the results came in.  We won quite a few of the awards:

Audience Award.

Best Film.

Best Directing.

Best Writing.

Best Acting.

Best Sound Design.

Wow.  I couldn't believe it.  Not only that.  As a result of our win, we were invited to participate in the International 48 Hour Film Festival HD Filmmaker Showdown.  But that's another blog!

Here's the film:


Blogs about my other comedy shorts:
Bag
Untitled Film, No. 9
Maestro Percival
I Will Not
And my college classic: The Lunch

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Saturday, July 24, 2010

Films Worth Seeing: Primer (2004)

(This is the second in a series of recommendations of worthy but little seen films.)


A group of four friends, who all work soul-deadening jobs during the week, work together on high-tech inventions at nights and on weekends hoping to find fame and fortune.  The lives of two of them change forever when they, quite inadvertently, invent a device that allows them to travel in time.

This is what independent film is all about, baby.  It was shot in Super 16mm for a budget of $7000.  Apparently, the filmmakers could only afford to do one take per shot and had to live with the results.  However, rather than hurting the film, the primitive production values give the film a semi-documentary feel.  Is there any scientific plausibility to the scenario?  I don't know.  I didn't understand the science behind it.  However, the characters did, and their informed conversations, which didn't dumb things down for the audience, lent credibility.

I always enjoy time travel films because of the inherent paradoxes.  The two friends in this film are both very aware of the paradoxes too.  They know they can't let their invention fall into the wrong hands, and each of them slowly grows paranoid that their partner might be the one with the wrong hands.  Events soon grow out of control.

That said, I defy anyone to explain exactly what happens in this film.  This film has been frequently shown on Murphy family movie nights and led to lively discussions about the film and the nature of time itself.  However, I doubt even the filmmakers themselves can explain everything they portray adequately within the universe they invented.  That is not a knock against the film.  It is refreshing to find a film every once and while that gives you enough wiggle room to supply your own explanations.

Here is one hint:  The first time Abe tells Aaron about the machine's capabilities, he is wearing headphones.  They are already in the time loop.

You take it from there.  

 Film Appreciations:

Once Upon A Time in Hollywood
Apocalypse Now
Runaway Train
The Legend of Hell House
Emperor of the North
The Hospital
Primer
Conspiracy

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Friday, July 23, 2010

"Hidden Secrets," Revealed, Part 5: Aftermath



I had less to do with the post-production of "Hidden Secrets" than any other feature film I have been involved with.  When the rough cut was completed, Tim and I were emailed a link to the film.  We watched it and contributed some notes.

I was generally happy with the rough cut.  The film had the feel and look of a made-for-cable Hallmark film, which was not altogether a bad thing.  I had also noticed that, as the various subplots and characters were trimmed to focus on the romantic plot, the film had become a chick flick.  I called David A.R. White had told him that.  He laughed.  He felt the same way.

I had two major problems with the edit.  The first problem was that they had cut a scene out of the first act at the cemetery where Tim and I had set up the major conflict:  That Jeremy and Sherry had dated for years and everyone expected them to get married before they mysteriously broke up.  Now, at her brother's funeral, Jeremy was seeing Sherry again for the first time in years, and bringing his new almost-fiance Rachel.  As I have lectured endlessly on this blog, I feel it is crucial to hook the audience early in the first act.  You have to let them know what they are watching.  Therefore, I felt this scene was incredibly important.  I knew they shot it, because they used flashbacks from it later in the film.  I asked A.R., as I like to call him, why they didn't use it.  He said they cut it to keep the movie moving.  I think it was a mistake.

Here they are at the cemetery (Hollywood Forever)
I have seen the film with many audiences -- at festivals and during its limited theatrical release.  You could see that audience really doesn't settle in and understand what the movie is all about until much later -- during the scene when Rachel and Sherry talk.  That's a pity.  Now, the significance of a lot of the nuanced conversation between the major characters during the wake sequence is lost.  Oh well.  You can't always get what you want....

My other problem was that the director, Carey Scott, a well-known acting teacher, seemed to be pushing the actors toward bigger emotional moments.  He wanted tears, from the actors if not the audience.  As a writer, I had always aimed toward smaller dramatic moments.  I felt smaller moments were more naturalistic.  However, this time and on this project, I might have been wrong.  Our audience seemed more than happy to go with the characters emotionally.  People cried right along with them.  It was the first produced script I had written that provoked tears from an audience -- in a good way.  (I do have an unproduced horror script that a couple of my readers said made them cry.)  I'll never forget the look on the face of one of my cynical, college-aged nieces who I took to see the film at a festival outside Pittsburgh.  During one of the emotional scenes, she glanced around the auditorium then turned to me and said, "They're sobbing, people are actually sobbing."  Indeed they were.  Thanks, Carey and company.  As a result, I am not as afraid to reach for emotion in a script anymore.

However, there was one big surprise with the film:  The attempted suicide opening.  When the film started, I was, like, "What the heck?"  Actually, I didn't use the work heck.  Apparently, someone at PureFlix decided we needed a stronger opening so there it was.  Okay.  If that's what they wanted....  Still, I wish they would have asked Tim and I to incorporate that into the film.  As it is now, the audience is supposed to assume Christopher Hayden, Sherry's unseen brother, committed suicide, only to shockingly reveal in the third act that it was instead Michael attempting to commit suicide.  The only problem is now that the audience wants know how Christopher died, and whoever made the changes didn't think to include that information.  And that's the biggest problem when producers or actors start making changes with a script.  They think of something to address an immediate need, but they do not take into account how that "little" change will affect other things.  After screenings of the film, invariably the first question I am asked is:  "How did Christopher die?"  The answer, for the record, an aneurysm.  Not that you'd be able to tell from the movie!

Speaking of screenings, the film played at a number of Christian-themed film festivals around the country where it was extremely well-received.  It was gratifying to see the film connect so emotionally with its intended audience.  Despite that, I was still happily surprised when "Hidden Secrets" got an limited release in 200+ theaters across the country.  Here's how it happened.  If you've been to the movies in the last couple of years, you've probably been bored senseless or irritated by all of the commercials they play before the trailers.  Well, the company that creates those commercial packages, NCM Fathom, also does special events like live opera from the Met, documentaries about dead Nascar drivers, and quirky Christian films.  They played the film in 23 markets on February 28th and March 1st.   Tim and I went to see it both nights.  Once in Washington, DC, and the next night in Bowie, Maryland.  Our theaters were rather sparsely populated, but apparently the film did much, much better in the Bible belt.

Discretion prevents me from telling how much the film grossed and netted during those screenings -- although it was more than Brian DePalma's heavily-publicized Iraq War film "Redacted."  However, between those two nights and a lucrative television deal, I am sure the investors were very happy campers indeed.  Now it was time for the DVD release.  The question remained:  Who was going to release it?

PureFlix produced the film, and they were also distributors, but they were in the process of looking for a distribution partner.  This was at the beginning of the faith-based film craze where Hollywood was looking for a way to capitalize on all the people who went out to see "The Passion of the Christ."  I have to be very discreet here, but it seemed that practically all the majors expressed interest in distributing PureFlix's upcoming slate of films of which "Hidden Secrets" was the first one to be produced.  (But ultimately not the first one to be released.)

These discussions were all very exciting until someone mentioned The Weinstein Company.  Whenever that happened, I wanted to shout, "No, No, NO!!!!" 

I had just read "Down and Dirty Motion Pictures" by Peter Biskin.  The lesson of this book on the independent film industry was that the Weinsteins stayed up late at night and woke up early every morning to find new ways to cheat filmmakers out of their profits.  Every time someone mentioned the Weinsteins.  I would recommend that they read Biskind's book before it was too late.  They said not to worry, they had an iron-clad contract.  Unfortunately, I already knew that mathematical equation:

(Ironclad Contract) + (The Weinstein Company) =  (No profits to filmmakers)*

How did the deal actually work out?  All discretion allows me to say is that the film seems to have sold a boatload of DVDs.  A very respectable seven-figure gross.  Overall, to date, the film is, in theory, the most financially successful one of my career.  My wife also thinks it is the best one.

Overall, the making of "Hidden Secrets" was a fabulous experience and opened the door to making more films with the mighty David A.R. White and company.

*BTW, PureFlix films are no longer distributed by The Weinstein Company.

Hidden Secrets, Revealed, Part 1, Pre-History
Hidden Secrets, Revealed, Part 2, First Contact
Hidden Secrets, Revealed, Part 3, The Writing
Hidden Secrets, Revealed, Part 4, Production

Read about the making of my other features:


Other Faith Based Writing Blogs:
Building The Faith Based Ghetto

Be sure to check out my memoir The Promise, or the Pros and Cons of Talking with God, published by TouchPoint Press. It is my true story of first faith and first love and how the two became almost fatally intertwined.


Here are some sample chapters of The Promise:

Be sure to check out my novel Chapel Street. It tells the story of a young man straddling the line between sanity and madness while battling a demonic entity that has driven his family members to suicide for generations. It was inspired by an actual haunting my family experienced.

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Learn more about the book, click Here.

Listen to me read some chapters here:


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Sunday, July 11, 2010

"Hidden Secrets" Revealed, Part 4, Production

Signed Title Page of the Script which was 
then called "A Simple Twist of Faith."


Despite the occasional hair-pulling craziness during the writing, the production itself was a delight.  At least as far as Tim and I were concerned.

Why?  Because if you're a writer on a real movie set, your work is done.  You get to sit back and enjoy and watch your words take human form.  If you are allowed on the set, that is.

Some directors and producers don't like to have the writer(s) on the set.  Why?  Because an unwitting writer can easily get himself into trouble.  Say, for example, that the director wants the beautiful starlet to play a scene one way, and she wants to play it another way.  An impasse is reached.  Production is halted.  Money is burning up.  She spots the writer.  She pulls him into the corner.  She strokes his hair.  She says, "When you wrote this scene, you imagined me playing it this way...."  It doesn't matter what she says.  You're a writer.  You spend eighteen hours a day in front of a computer screen.  She's a starlet.  She's beautiful.  She's famous.  Of course you're going to agree with her.  And you do.  She immediately goes to the director and tells him that you wrote it the way she pictured it.  The director comes over and hits you with a hammer.

I wish that happened to me.  Well, everything but the hammer part.

However, on the set of "21 Eyes," one of the actors asked me about a line in the script.  I innocently told him what I thought.  He agreed and did it that way every time -- despite the fact that the director Lee Bonner came over after every take and asked him to do it another way.  Fortunately, Lee never found out that I was partly responsible for the problem, and, hopefully, he never will.  Unless he's reading this now.  If so:  "Sorry, Lee."

So, as we were flying west, I kept telling Tim that we had to keep our mouths shut and speak only when spoken too.  I kept verbalizing it to Tim, but, I think I was mainly warning myself.  If you have been reading my blog, you might have noticed that I tend to say too much.

Most of the film was shot in Calabasas, California.  We checked into a scary hotel.  When I say scary, I mean it looked nice enough until we saw this sign:

Yikes...

Ah, who cares.  Who wouldn't risk a little reproductive harm!   We were in Hollywood making a movie.  (Well, north of Hollywood, actually.)

Oh.  By the way.  Something interesting happened between first contact and the shoot.  Originally, this had been an Eagle Rock Production to star David A.R. White and Kevin Downes.  However, during the writing, the two producing partners had parted ways.  David was granted custody of Tim and myself during the divorce.  Now the film was slated to be the first production of a new company called Pure Flix.

We arrived a few days into the shoot.  We were only present for a few days of the shooting at the McMansion where most of the film took place.  One of the interesting things about the shoot was that, although, technically-speaking, this was a local LA job, a number of the actors and crew chose to live at the house during the shoot rather than drive into Calabasas every day for the early call.

The mood at the house was good by the time Tim and I arrived.  The cast and crew had grown into a well-oiled machine.  Everybody talked about how much better everything was now.  That made me wonder about what had happened before....  Well, apparently, they had shot the nightclub scenes first -- including all the three bands in one long stressful night.  After hearing the stories, I was glad Tim and I had gotten there afterwards.  Who needs the stress?  However, I must admit that I wanted to see the fictional band consisting of our characters because we had given the band the same name as a band I had played in with a group of friends:  The Atomic Enema.  Here's the real band:

Real Rock 'n' Roll with the Real Atomic Enema
Nick Mazziott, Mike Mazziott, Sean Murphy, Jim Jackson

An interesting thing apparently happened at the nightclub.  At the club, Jeremy and Sherry, the former high school sweethearts, find themselves slow dancing to a song a band is playing.  The dance brings back a flood of memories to Sherry about their prom.  That's the way it was written.  Unfortunately, the same forces that caused so many changes in the script were also present on the set.  Someone decided that it might offend the Baptists if our two leads danced.  So, instead, they had the conversation while sitting at a table.  Sadly, that change effectively eliminated the motivation for the whole conversation.  I know the actress playing Sherry, the inimitable Tracy Melchior, really wanted to play the scene while dancing.  I'm glad I wasn't there, because if I were, and she would have asked me, I would have completely agreed with her and someone would have hit me with a hammer.

Oh well.

Let's talk about the cast.

David A.R. White and Sean A.R. Murphy

The mighty David A.R. White was a given from the start.  This was his movie.  Aside from being the lead, he was also one of the producers.  And, since he was the producer that signed my checks, he was the main producer in my eyes.  I was glad that Tim and I were given the chance to give him a real, romantic lead.  Although there had been romantic subplots in some of his earlier faith-based pictures, this was the first one where the romantic story was the main plot.  I knew he could pull it off and he did.

Prior to our arrival on the set, all of our exchanges with David had taken place on the phone or via email.  We found him quite warm and friendly in person.  He welcomed us onto the set and made us feel at home.  He would even occasionally ask our opinion.  Watching him between takes, Tim and I both noticed he had a talent for comedy which heretofore had not been evident in his previous films.  We immediately thought we would like to write a comedy for him. That was before we discovered that Christians and comedies don't mix.  (Or should I say Christian gatekeepers!)

Tracy Melchior
Breaking The Perfect 10

I believe Tracy was one of the last actors cast in the film.  Some well known actresses were apparently interested in the role, but the pro-life theme scared them off.  (Interestingly, they didn't mind appearing in a Christian film, but a pro-life sentiment is taboo.)  Thank goodness for Tracy!  She was a soap opera star appearing on "The Bold and The Beautiful."  The producers became aware of her after she appeared on the Larry King Show talking about her memoir "Breaking The Perfect 10."  In the book, she revealed how she had broken all ten of the commandments, including Thou Shall Not Kill.  She had broken that commandment when she had an abortion.  As a result, they sent her the script and she was very happy to appear in the film because it spoke to her feelings about the subject abortion.

Tracy is a very thoughtful and committed actress.  I was really impressed with her.  One thing that constantly amazed me was how the actors and actresses were able to do so many script pages a day.  "This is nothing," she said to me once.  "On the soap operas, we do sixty pages a day."

You should buy her book.  It's great.  Breaking the Perfect 10

By the way, Tracy inspired an award-winning short film I later wrote.  I'll tell you about that later.

Staci Keanan and Tim Ratajczak

Little did Tim and I know when they cast Staci for this film that she would be in practically every film we wrote afterwards.  Our only problem is that she hasn't appeared in all of them.  Staci, of course, was the veteran of two successful television series "My Two Dads" and "Step By Step."  She is a very sweet and talented woman.  If she isn't working every day, it must be because she doesn't want to.  She has now been in three of our films in three very different roles.  The problem is that in our films she's always the bridesmaid, she's never the bride.  She's always the best friend or the sister of the lead, and she shines in those roles, but it would be interesting to see her as the female lead.  I must confess that when I wrote my screenplay "Judy," I always pictured Staci in the lead.

Ladies and gentlemen, Mr. John Schneider

I hear we got John Schneider because he specifically asked if agent to seek out a faith-based script.  Fortunately, he found ours and liked it.  I think his appeal could be summed up by something I heard seconds after I first met him.  I was standing in the corner as he was walking to the set.  As he passed by, one of our youthful female PAs turned to another youthful PA and whispered, "I know he's old enough to be my father, but, omigod, he is sooo cute."  But he is actually more than just cute.  He is a consummate professional and very easy-going.  And, unlike a lot of stars who rose to fame in a high-profile role, he doesn't run away from his past.  He embraces his inner Bo Duke.  My biggest regret of the trip was that Tim and I chose to do some sight-seeing the day John drove up in the General Lee, his car from "The Dukes of Hazard."  He took pictures in it with anyone who wanted one.

John also ad-libbed a few great lines during the shoot.  Unfortunately, they didn't make it to the final film because someone thought they were too glib for a funeral.  (That person had never been to a Murphy funeral!)  There was something else that I didn't know about John that I learned later.  He is a tireless promoter of his work.  Every where he went, and on every interview he gave, he talked up the movie.  And he goes a lot of places and gives a lot of interviews.  I thanked him for it later when we met again on the next movie.  He said what he didn't understand was why actors would take the time to make a movie and not promote it!

A class act.


Parker Lewis Still Can't Lose.

I didn't chat much with Corin Nemec.  He seemed quiet and contemplative.  Some actors are very chatty on the set. Other actors seem to need a quiet space to find what they want in the next scene.  Corin seemed to be the latter.  Not that he wasn't a very nice guy when you talked to him.  He was.   But I never wanted to interfere with his craft and preparations.  There was one thing I found very amusing.  There is a scene at the wake where the nosy, judgmental Rhonda interrogates him.  Eventually, she starts talking about his relationship with women, of which he expresses a certain purity -- which isn't surprising since he's been struggling with homosexuality.  In the original script, the encounter ends with Rhonda saying "I wish there were more men like you," and Michael responding, "So do I."  Unfortunately, Michael's line was cut out long before the script got to the actors.  However, since the scene naturally builds to that moment, Corin actually ad-libbed that line.  It got the biggest laugh on the set.  I talked to one of the producers and said we gotta use it.  He said yeah, but it didn't make it to the film.

I feel sorry for Corin.  He had a much more interesting and fun character to play in the original script.  Now he's simply serves as a matchmaker between Jeremy and Sherry with no real character arc.  Oh well.  Those things happen.

I wish I had a picture with him for Facebook.

Greg Binkley

Gregg Binkley may not be as well known as the other actors listed above -- unless you live on the West Coast where he was the "Del Taco Guy" -- but he is just as talented.  We loved him.  He took the role of Rhonda's henpecked husband Harold and ran with it.  Gregg has great comic timing.  He got huge laughs out of the audiences with the smallest looks and gestures.  This man should be a star!  Tim and I are doing all we can.  We always try to write him into every script.  Sometimes we'll give the producer subtle hints by giving these characters names like "Gregg Hinckley."  As it is, I am always happy to see him showing up in big Hollywood films like "State of Play" and "The Changling."  We knew him when.

John Schneider, Autumn Paul, Greg Binkley

A lot of actors judge the importance of a role by the number of lines or the screen time, but Autumn practically stole the film with the small but shrewish role of Rhonda.  People love to hate her, but, trust me, she was much sweeter in real life!



Sean Sedgwick

Back in the day, when I was a boy producer for an advertising agency, a lot of headshots crossed by desk.  You'd look at the photo then flip it over and look at the attached resume.  At the bottom, actors would always list activities they did like scuba diving, horse backing riding, cooking, etc.  I always found it kind of ridiculous.  However, all you actors out there, be sure to put down all those activities.  I asked David how he found and cast Sean as the ne'er-do-well friend Anthony.  He said they cast him because listed drumming as one of his activities.  And he really could drum!  Watch the film.  He's in time.   We've subsequently worked with Sean on other projects and look forward to working with him again.

We Seans have to stick together.


Yours truly, director Carey Scott and scripty Marcella Bremond

I believed I managed to accomplish my primary role of keeping out of the hard-working cast and crew of "Hidden Secrets."  Sadly, Tim and I never got the opportunity to meet Rachael Lampa or the band Building 429.  They were shooting any of the days we were there.  I was grateful that we managed to get as many Rachael Lampa as we did in the soundtrack.  They hit the mood perfectly.

Overall, the production was a dream come true.

Hidden Secrets, Revealed, Part 1, Pre-History
Hidden Secrets, Revealed, Part 2, First Contact
Hidden Secrets, Revealed, Part 3, The Writing
Hidden Secrets, Revealed, Part 4, Production

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Other Faith Based Writing Blogs:
Building The Faith Based Ghetto

Be sure to check out my memoir The Promise, or the Pros and Cons of Talking with God, published by TouchPoint Press. It is my true story of first faith and first love and how the two became almost fatally intertwined.


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Be sure to check out my novel Chapel Street. It tells the story of a young man straddling the line between sanity and madness while battling a demonic entity that has driven his family members to suicide for generations. It was inspired by an actual haunting my family experienced.

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Saturday, July 3, 2010

"Hidden Secrets" The Trailer

By the way, since we're discussing it, here's the trailer for "Hidden Secrets":

Monday, June 21, 2010

Films Worth Seeing: Conspiracy (2001)

(This is the first in a series of recommendations of worthy but little seen films.)



Conspiracy consists, essentially, of a group of men sitting around a table talking.  That's normally a kiss of death for a film.  To succeed, a lot depends on the conversation, and, in this case, the conversation revolves around the best and most efficient way to murder all of the Jews in Europe.

Conspiracy is based on the sole remaining transcript of The Wannsee Conference, where the heads of various branches of the German government and military gathered together to plan and initiate the Final Solution.  This film is a re-enactment of perhaps the single most evil and shameful two hours in the history of Western civilization.   Many people foolishly equate prejudice and hatred with ignorance.  Not so, as this film clearly illustrates.  The men sitting around that table were all intelligent and well educated.  Most had college degrees.  Many had advanced degrees.  Of the fifteen participants in the Conference, shockingly, only four of them truly voice any opposition to the plan.  Even then, only one of them, Wilhelm Kritzinger, played by David Threlfall, offers anything close to moral outrage one would expect from a normal human being.  However, in the end, they all agree to the plan put forth by SS General Reinhard Heydrich, played by Kenneth Branagh. 

The film was produced by HBO and the BBC.  It was directed by the Academy-Award winning screenwriter Frank Pierson.  He won the Oscar for Dog Day Afternoon and was nominated for Cat Ballou and Cool Hand Luke.  The film was written by the multi-Emmy-Award winning and nominated writer Loring Mandel.  He won an Emmy for this film.

The script is extremely well-written and well-researched.  The use of language comes as a rare treat to the ears.  With Hollywood's emphasis today on action and words that are easily translated into the global marketplace,  it is unusual to find any film today that features so much intelligent conversation between educated, albeit evil, people.

Well worth a look.  Check it out.

Here it is the trailer:



Film Appreciations:

Once Upon A Time in Hollywood
Apocalypse Now
Runaway Train
The Legend of Hell House
Emperor of the North
The Hospital
Primer
Conspiracy

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