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It was my intention to talk about the making of my films in the order of their production, but, frankly, there was so much work in such a brief period of time that it's all a blur. It's hard to figure out what project we wrote in what order. I do believe Holyman Undercover was the first script that Tim and I were commissioned to write after Hidden Secrets. However, we might've been commissioned to write a still unproduced Christmas film before this one. Who knows.
This project began innocently enough. America's favorite Mennonite, David A.R. White, had been performing his Holyman Undercover one-man show in churches around the country for a couple of years. The show was co-written by David and Jill Gatsby, the daughter of B-movie master Larry Cohen (It's Alive, Maniac Cop,) and the niece of the murdered Hollywood publicist Ronni Chasen. The show was loosely based on David's own true life story. David was born in a Mennonite community in Kansas, and, while attending Moody Bible Institute, decided to move to Los Angeles to become an actor, only to find himself cast a few months later as a regular on the hit TV series Evening Shade with Burt Reynolds. The one-man show exaggerated his story to an absurd extreme.
Sometime while Hidden Secrets was still in final post-production, David called and asked if Timothy Ratajczak and I would like to catch his show while he performed it in nearby New Jersey. We said yes. Tim thought it was just a friendly invitation, but I knew it was work. We drove to a small church in an area of New Jersey so far off the beaten track that bears actually feasted in their trash cans. (Sadly, there were none when we were there.) The event was organized for the church by fellow Sons of the Desert member Paul Castiglia and his wife Barbara, who have become good friends over the years. (Read this blog: Sacred Silly)
Sean, David A.R. White and Debbie in New Jersey
David's show surprised me. Mainly because of how risque it was for an entertainment designed to play in churches or before religious groups. I was particularly amazed by the amount of drug humor, but, hey, what can you say? It seemed to be working for him. Afterwards, David popped the question: Would we be interested in adapting the one man show to the silver screen? The answer was, as always, yes. Fellow scribes, the answer to whether you take a paid assignment is always yes. That said, I had misgivings from the beginning.
Generally, I have always been considered funny. Not just looking, either. Throughout my schooling, My humorous essays and stories have always been appreciated by my teachers and fellow students alike. It could be said that I moved from the mailroom to the production department of the advertising agency Smith Burke & Azzam as a result of my weekly memos detailing the exploits of the company softball team. Comedy shouldn't be hard for me, and it isn't. Audiences laughed at the jokes in 21 Eyes and Hidden Secrets. But neither of them were first and foremost comedies. Comedies made me uneasy.
Previously, I had only written two out-and-out comedies. The first one was called The Premier. It was about the communist leader of a small Eastern European country who sneaks away from his delegation while visiting the UN to taste American-style freedom. I wrote that script with David Butler, based in part on an idea by former Towson classmate Tom Brandau. Later I wrote another one with Smith Burke & Azzam art director Andy Stoller called Superguys. It was about some Superheroes, forced out of the business by government regulations, who team up again after their nemesis returns. Yes, folks, it was very much like The Incredibles, but without all the family stuff.
I thought the scripts were both very funny. I always strived to make sure we had four laughs per page -- for a total of approximately 440 laughs per script. Sadly, the readers didn't feel the same way. I didn't have any representation when we wrote The Premier, but I had no problem getting it read by production companies. The Berlin Wall was coming down so communism was very hot. Unfortunately, the very fact that the Berlin Wall was coming down made the script completely irrelevant. There was no way anyone would ever make it. Even if they liked it. And I don't know if they did.
One of the companies returned the script with a nice rejection letter, but had inadvertently left the readers notes inside. Readers, for those of you not in the business, are the poor schlubbs that producers and agents hire to go wade through the avalanche of scripts they receive each week. They summarize the story and tell their bosses what they think of the script. This reader didn't think much of it. That didn't bother me. What bothered me was that he simply didn't get it. Not at all. The satire and tone of the film went totally over his head. He didn't even realize who the good guys and bad guys were until the third act. Oy vey.
I didn't have much luck with Superguys either. At the time I was represented by Stu Robinson at Robinson Weintraub and Gross. He didn't care for the script. He didn't think the marketplace was ready for a superhero parody at the time. Still, I wanted to give it a try. I asked Stu if he would send it to companies that requested it if I drummed up some interest. He said yes, and he did, but it never went anywhere. It was somewhat disillusioning because I felt it was a very funny script. That's why I stopped writing comedies. Humor is too subjective. You can usually tell on the page whether a drama or an action film will work.
But despite my misgivings, I happily said yes. After all, this project was an adaptation of an existing property that seemed to being working fine with the target audience. Plus, I had the mighty Tim Ratajczak on my side -- the Woody Allen of Baltimore. How could we lose? (Stay tuned...)
The first question was how to open up the show. Tim and I felt the key would be turning it into a romance. A great deal of time was devoted to figuring out who the female character would be -- although not who would be playing her. The decision was already made that she would be played by David's real life wife, the lovely and talented Andrea Logan White. Initially Tim and I were leaning toward the concept of letting the woman be a Hollywood newcomer, much like David's naive Amish character Roy Weichbrodt. The woman would constantly refuse to compromise her values and, while she wouldn't achieve Roy's success, she would be happier and more grounded. She would be the person who led Roy back to his values.
Andrea Logan White
David didn't like that. He wanted the woman to be more glamorous. So Tim and I came up with the idea of making her a producer with a secret. Her secret was that, although she projected an image of being hard and tough, she was really a sweet, farm girl on the inside. Innocent Roy would bring out the sweetness in her. But how would Roy catch the attention of such a power broker? By saving her life. That was a trope that worried David throughout the entire process.
The rest was easy. We changed Roy from Mennonite to Amish if only because the Amish were less likely to get mad since they wouldn't be allowed to watch the movie anyway. We also changed the wacky Hollywood roommate of the show into a wacky long lost uncle Brian, a self-proclaimed Holyman Undercover, who wanted to spread the gospel subliminally, and we were off to the races. Tim and I hammered out a very detailed treatment, with whole scenes and snatches of dialogue, over a couple weekends. The plot was simple: An innocent Amish man goes to Hollywood to find his long, lost uncle, and ends up falling in love with a beautiful producer and playing Satan on a hit TV show. During his comic misadventures, Roy would lose sight of his values, but he would come to his senses by the final reel.
When we finished the script, we sent it to David and waited.
And waited.
And waited.
The silence was becoming deafening. Were Tim and I just going to have to take the money and walk away? (Not such a terrible fate, oh my brothers!)
Then David sent us back a rough draft of the script. Since the story was based loosely on his life, in addition to directing the film, he wanted to try to write the script himself. He took it as far as he could. We were kind of shocked by that revelation, but what the heck! Now we were back on. It was a smooth writing experience. When Tim and I were finished, David gave it to his partners at Pure Flix.
They HATED it. HATED, HATED, HATED IT. They felt the Christian audience would be offended by the film. They wouldn't put a cent into it. (I must admit I was worried about the drug material, but Tim and I had really watered it down during the writing process. It was no longer a key issue.)
David was not deterred. If Pure Flix didn't want to do the movie, we would do it ourselves without them. David, Tim and myself were going to produce this film independently. David wanted to start shooting immediately, and gathered about himself a cast and crew of friends. Fortunately, one of those friends included Gregg Binkley, who had played the henpecked husband in Hidden Secrets. Tim and I thought he was hilarious. As a subtle hint to David, we had named the character we wanted Binkley to play Gregg. David took the hint.
Gregg and his son on the set.
Spending money out of pocket, David shot a number of scenes over the course of a couple of weekends. They included Roy's audition scene where he tries out for the role of the Devil, his first date with Annie, and his Calm-O commercial. (The Calm-O commercial is one of the only scenes lifted directly from the one man show.) Easily twenty-five percent of the film was shot with this skeleton cast and crew. It was a true tribute to David's vision.
While David was shooting in LA, my accursed Italian restaurant movie was falling apart in Baltimore. Fortunately, I had gotten to know Matt Richards, one of that projects' rejected investors, and gave him a copy of the "Holyman Undercover" script and some of Pure Flix's marketing materials. He liked the script and decided to finance the entire film himself.
Suddenly everything changed. Now that financing was in place, the good folks at Pure Flix very much wanted to do the movie. They pulled out David's contract with the company which stipulated that he couldn't produce films without them. And, since Tim and I had never taken the time to formalize a written production deal with David while we were all in the wilderness, we were completely left out in the cold. It went from being OUR film to a Pure Flix film on which we were simply hired hands with a few measly points. We were placated in part by the fact that David, although he would share in the profits as a Pure Flix partner, had lost more. He had lost control of his life story. Trust me, I would never let that happen again! At least not until the upcoming gmc television series Brotha White. (Don't get me started.)
We could have been bitter, but what would have been the point? We were making a movie. And, frankly, a fun one at that. For the first time, Tim and I were actively involved in the casting. Aside from Gregg Binkley, some of our favorite actors from Hidden Secrets were returning. We had John Schneider in a cameo as the devil, and the always charming Staci Keanan as Annie's best friend Carmen. Even Carey Scott, the director of Hidden Secrets, gave a wonderful turn as a pretentious restaurant owner. Our enthusiasm grew when Clint Howard and Edie McClurg signed on as Roy's parents. When it came time to fill some of the smaller roles, David would sent me DVDs of the casting sessions. Then Tim and I would head out to Xanadau, Matt's palatial pleasure dome, to watch the discs and make our picks. We were generally in agreement with the folks in Hollywood. We loved Jeremy Luc who played the amiable drug dealer Pinky, but I always felt sorry for him. In the original script, his character served as Roy's mentor after his Uncle Brian ends up in jail. By the time we were shooting, Pinky only had two scenes, and we cut one of them in post. Sorry Jeremy! We also really loved Jennifer Lyons as the narcissistic seductress Tiffany Towers. She absolutely captured the essence of the character, and, in the process, ultimately doomed our film. But I'll get to that later.
Jennifer Lyons with America's favorite Fatman
Every low budget film needs a name actor for the box. Originally, Uncle Brian was conceived as a role for a box name, but David's agent felt David should play that role too. His agent was grooming him to be the next Tyler Perry and he thought Uncle Brian could be his Medea. There were no objections. Fortunately, we had another suitable role for the box name: Richard, the head of the television network. Tim and I were constantly being asked to rewrite that role to suit the actors to whom the script was being sent. One week it was Joe Pesci. One week it was Christopher Walken. One week it was Luke Skywalker himself: Mark Hamil. Before we sent him the script, David said we had to include some Star Wars references. We changed the location of one of Richard's scenes to a Chinese restaurant so that, when he noticed his assistant was having trouble with the chopsticks, he could say, "Use the forks." Matt, by the way, came up with that joke, if I am not mistaken. Mark Hamil was not amused. Oh well.
Use the forks, Luke....
Ultimately, we got Fred Willard for the role. It was a dream come true. I don't think anyone could have done it better!
It was time to return to Hollywood.
To be continued....
Holyman Undercover, Part 1, Pre-Production
Holyman Undercover, Part 2, Good Times
Holyman Undercover, Part 3, Bad Times
Holyman Undercover Released
Read about the making of my other features:
The Making of 21 Eyes
The Making of Hidden Secrets
The Making of Holyman Undercover
The Making of Sarah's Choice
The Making of The Encounter
The Making of Run On
Other Faith Based Writing Blogs:
Building The Faith Based Ghetto
Building The Faith Based Ghetto
Do Christian Creators Know When Their Movies Are Bad?
God Told Me To Write It
Enter The Haters
Zach Lawrence and the End Times Quandary
God Told Me To Write It
Enter The Haters
Zach Lawrence and the End Times Quandary
Be sure to check out my memoir The Promise, or the Pros and Cons of Talking with God, published by TouchPoint Press. It is my true story of first faith and first love and how the two became almost fatally intertwined.
Here are some sample chapters of The Promise:
Chapter 7 - Mission Accomplished
Chapter 15 - Quarter To Midnight
Be sure to check out my novel Chapel Street. It tells the story of a young man straddling the line between sanity and madness while battling a demonic entity that has driven his family members to suicide for generations. It was inspired by an actual haunting my family experienced.
You can buy the Kindle and paperback at Amazon and the Nook, paperback and hardcover at Barnes & Noble.
Chapter 15 - Quarter To Midnight
Be sure to check out my novel Chapel Street. It tells the story of a young man straddling the line between sanity and madness while battling a demonic entity that has driven his family members to suicide for generations. It was inspired by an actual haunting my family experienced.
You can buy the Kindle and paperback at Amazon and the Nook, paperback and hardcover at Barnes & Noble.
Listen to me read some chapters here:
Read about the true haunting that inspired the novel here:
The Haunting of 21 St. Helens Avenue, Part 1, An Introduction
The Haunting of 21 St. Helens Avenue, Part 1, An Introduction
The Haunting of 21 St. Helens Avenue, Part 2, The House
The Haunting of 21 St. Helens Avenue, Part 3, This Is Us
The Haunting of 21 St. Helens Avenue, Part 4, Arrival
The Haunting of 21 St. Helens Avenue, Part 5, Methodology
The Haunting of 21 St. Helens Avenue, Part 6, Clara's Tale, Pt. 1
The Haunting of 21 St. Helens Avenue, Part 7, Clara's Tale, Pt. 2
The Haunting of 21 St. Helens Avenue, Part 8, My Tale, Pt. 1
The Haunting of 21 St. Helens Avenue, Part 9, My Tale, Pt. 2
The Haunting of 21 St. Helens Avenue, Part 10, My Tale, Pt. 3
The Haunting of 21 St. Helens Avenue, Part 11, Natalia's Tale, Pt. 1
The Haunting of 21 St. Helens Avenue, Part 12, Natalia's Tale, Pt. 2
The Haunting of 21 St. Helens Avenue, Part 13, John's Tale, Pt. 1
The Haunting of 21 St. Helens Avenue, Part 14, John's Tale, Pt. 2
The Haunting of 21 St. Helens Avenue, Part 15, Come Inside!
The Haunting of 21 St. Helens Avenue, Part 16, Marion's Tale, Pt. 1
The Haunting of 21 St. Helens Avenue, Part 17, Marion's Tale, Pt. 2
The Haunting of 21 St. Helens Avenue, Part 18, Jeanne's Tale, Pt. 1
The Haunting of 21 St. Helens Avenue, Part 19, Jeanne's Tale, Pt. 2
The Haunting of 21 St. Helens Avenue, Part 20, Lisa's Tale
The Haunting of 21 St. Helens Avenue, Part 21, Recap, Pt. 1
The Haunting of 21 St. Helens Avenue, Part 22, Recap, Pt. 2
The Haunting of 21 St. Helens Avenue, Part 23, Recap, Pt. 3
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The Haunting of 21 St. Helens Avenue, Part 3, This Is Us
The Haunting of 21 St. Helens Avenue, Part 4, Arrival
The Haunting of 21 St. Helens Avenue, Part 5, Methodology
The Haunting of 21 St. Helens Avenue, Part 6, Clara's Tale, Pt. 1
The Haunting of 21 St. Helens Avenue, Part 7, Clara's Tale, Pt. 2
The Haunting of 21 St. Helens Avenue, Part 8, My Tale, Pt. 1
The Haunting of 21 St. Helens Avenue, Part 9, My Tale, Pt. 2
The Haunting of 21 St. Helens Avenue, Part 10, My Tale, Pt. 3
The Haunting of 21 St. Helens Avenue, Part 11, Natalia's Tale, Pt. 1
The Haunting of 21 St. Helens Avenue, Part 12, Natalia's Tale, Pt. 2
The Haunting of 21 St. Helens Avenue, Part 13, John's Tale, Pt. 1
The Haunting of 21 St. Helens Avenue, Part 14, John's Tale, Pt. 2
The Haunting of 21 St. Helens Avenue, Part 15, Come Inside!
The Haunting of 21 St. Helens Avenue, Part 16, Marion's Tale, Pt. 1
The Haunting of 21 St. Helens Avenue, Part 17, Marion's Tale, Pt. 2
The Haunting of 21 St. Helens Avenue, Part 18, Jeanne's Tale, Pt. 1
The Haunting of 21 St. Helens Avenue, Part 19, Jeanne's Tale, Pt. 2
The Haunting of 21 St. Helens Avenue, Part 20, Lisa's Tale
The Haunting of 21 St. Helens Avenue, Part 21, Recap, Pt. 1
The Haunting of 21 St. Helens Avenue, Part 22, Recap, Pt. 2
The Haunting of 21 St. Helens Avenue, Part 23, Recap, Pt. 3
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Great post, Sean - and I'm not just saying that because you gave me and Barb a shout-out (not to mention "Scared Silly!"). Looking forward to seeing you (and Deb) again in 2011!
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