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Sunday, June 18, 2023

Grading ChatGPT, Part 1: "Wings of Courage"

My fascination with artificial intelligence continues, especially since the use of AI is a major factor in the negotiations between the studios and the striking WGA,w. I believe AI will be a threat to a number of professions in the future. But is it a threat to writers now? I decided to do a little experiment.

I asked ChatGPT to write a script for me, which I would then grade using the same criterion I employed with my students when I taught at Towson University.

I taught the class Broadcast/Film Writing for a few semesters at the University before COVID temporarily dampened enrollment. It was a 300 level course in the Electronic Media and Film Department. The class had two pre-requisites, and the textbook was The Short Screenplay by Daniel Gurskis. The syllabus, which I did not write, outlined a number of laudable goals for the class. However, its real purpose was to help the students write good, shootable scripts for their advanced production classes.

The class had six graded assignments.

1). Nonfiction Treatment Proposal.

2). Nonfiction Script

3). 2-4 Minute Short Treatment

4). 2-4 Minute Screenplay

5). 5-8 Minute Short Treatment

6). 5-8 Minute Screenplay (Final Project)

Here's the grading rubric for the fiction projects:

EMF 377 GRADING RUBRIC –

FICTION SCRIPT ASSIGNMENTS

Rubric Elements	Unsatisfactory 1 point	Average 2 points	Above Average 3 points	Excellent 4 points	Total
Protagonist Description, Motivation, Action	insufficient or lackluster portrayal of the protagonist	adequate portrayal of the protagonist	effective portrayal of the protagonist	vivid, superior work
Antagonist/ Source of Conflict Description, Motivation, Action	insufficient or lackluster portrayal of the antagonist/ conflict	adequate portrayal of the antagonist/ source of conflict	effective portrayal of the antagonist/source of conflict	vivid, superior work
Dramatic Structure Setup, Development& Climax/ Resolution	poor or ineffective use of the required dramatic structural elements	adequate use of the required dramatic structural elements	effective use of the required dramatic structural elements	superior use of the required elements
Format Script format as specified by the instructor & text	flawed, numerous errors	adequate, some errors	effective, very few errors.	professional& error-free
Writing Grammar, Punctuation, Spelling, Visual storytelling	flawed, many errors	adequate, with some errors	effective, very few errors.	professional & error-free
A = 17-20 B+ = 16 B = 14-15 C+ = 11-13 C = 9-10 D+ = 7-8 D = 6 F= 5 & below					Score

How did ChatGPT do? Here's the command I gave it: "Write a screenplay about a World War II pilot worried about dying on a mission."

Here's the result:

Title: "Wings of Courage"

INT. PILOT'S QUARTERS - NIGHT

A dimly lit room, filled with memorabilia of World War II. JAMES, a seasoned pilot in his early thirties, sits on the edge of his bed, a troubled expression on his face. He flips through a photo album, filled with pictures of his comrades, some crossed out with a pen.

JAMES (whispering to himself) How many more missions can I survive? Will tomorrow be the day I don't make it back?

INT. MESS HALL - DAY

James sits at a table, surrounded by fellow PILOTS. Laughter and conversation fill the air. But James remains distant, lost in his own thoughts. His eyes wander, observing the camaraderie around him.

PILOT 1 Hey, James, you've been quiet lately. Everything alright?

James snaps back to reality, forcing a smile.

JAMES Yeah, just preoccupied with the upcoming mission, I guess.

PILOT 2 You worry too much, mate. We've flown countless missions, and we're still here.

INT. AIRFIELD - DAY

James walks towards his P-51 MUSTANG plane, his trusted companion. He runs his hand along the fuselage, feeling the cold metal beneath his fingers. His anxiety builds.

JAMES (whispering) Come on, old girl. Bring me back safely, just one more time.

INT. READY ROOM - DAY

James and his comrades sit in a briefing room, maps and mission details projected on the wall. The COMMANDER, a stern man in his fifties, stands at the front.

COMMANDER Gentlemen, our mission tomorrow is critical. We're heading deep into enemy territory to neutralize a high-priority target.

James feels a knot forming in his stomach. His hands tremble slightly.

COMMANDER (CONT'D) We've trained for this. We know our jobs, and we know what's at stake. We're the best damn pilots out there.

James steals glances at his fellow pilots, his nerves still evident.

COMMANDER (CONT'D) Trust in your training, trust in your comrades, and most importantly, trust in yourselves. Now, let's bring the fight to them!

The pilots cheer, but James's enthusiasm is restrained.

INT. SQUADRON BRIEFING ROOM - NIGHT

James sits alone at a table, sipping coffee, his face etched with worry. Suddenly, the door opens, revealing SARAH, a young nurse in her twenties. She walks over to James, concern in her eyes.

SARAH You seem troubled, James. Is there something bothering you?

James hesitates, then opens up to Sarah.

JAMES I can't shake this feeling, Sarah. Every mission, the fear of not making it back haunts me. I've seen too many friends go down.

Sarah reaches out, placing a comforting hand on James's.

SARAH It's natural to be scared, James. But remember why you're fighting. Remember the lives you've saved, the freedom you're defending. Have faith in your skills and the strength of your spirit.

James gazes at Sarah, finding solace in her words.

INT. AIRPLANE COCKPIT - DAY

James sits in the cockpit of his Mustang, gripping the control stick tightly. He takes a deep breath, steeling himself for what lies ahead.

JAMES (to himself) I can do this. I will come back.

EXT. SKIES ABOVE ENEMY TERRITORY - DAY

James's squadron soars through the skies, their engines roaring. Enemy flak erupts around them, the sky filled with chaos. James skillfully maneuvers through the onslaught, determination etched on his face.

INT. AIRPLANE COCKPIT - DAY

James scans the skies, his heart pounding. Suddenly, an enemy fighter appears, heading straight toward him. Fear grips James, but he remembers Sarah's words, finding strength in them.

EXT. SKIES ABOVE ENEMY TERRITORY - DAY

James engages the enemy fighter, engaging in a fierce dogfight. Bullets whiz past him, but he maintains his focus, his skills honed through countless missions.

INT. AIRPLANE COCKPIT - DAY

James's plane shudders from a near-miss, smoke filling the cockpit. Fear and doubt threaten to overwhelm him, but he takes a deep breath, remembering his purpose.

JAMES (out loud) I will make it back. I must.

EXT. SKIES ABOVE ENEMY TERRITORY - DAY

James maneuvers his plane, deftly evading enemy fire. With a well-placed shot, he takes down the enemy fighter, the victory surging through his veins.

INT. AIRPLANE COCKPIT - DAY

A smile breaks across James's face, his confidence restored. He adjusts his course, heading back towards home.

EXT. AIRFIELD - DAY

James's plane lands on the airfield, rolling to a stop. The canopy opens, and James climbs out, greeted by cheers from his comrades.

COMMANDER (slapping James's back) Well done, James! You brought us all back.

James looks around, relief and gratitude filling his eyes.

JAMES (with a mix of relief and joy) We did it. We made it back.

Sarah stands in the crowd, her eyes meeting James's. They share a moment of profound understanding and connection.

FADE OUT.

Okay. If this script came from a student, how would I rank it. Note: I am giving the ChatGPT the benefit of the doubt concerning screenplay formatting. I instructed all of my students to use screenplay writing programs like Final Draft or Celtx, so, if ChatGPT attended my class, it would have used the proper formatting. As it stands now, ChatGPT simply doesn't have the ability to write in traditional screenwriting format. (Plus, I can't execute proper screenplay formatting in this blog either!)

1). Protagonist: Description, Motivation, Action. Although James' description was weak, overall it was a adequate portrayal. 2 points.

2). Antagonist/Conflict: Description, Motivation, Action. The conflict was essentially internal, but it was effective. 3 points.

3). Dramatic Structure: Setup, Development & Climax/Resolution. The script was structurally sound with a beginning, middle and end. I would rate it effective. 3 points.

4). Format: Script format was specified by the instructor & text. For reasons I mentioned earlier, I am giving it 4 points.

5). Writing: Grammar, Punctuation, Spelling, Visual storytelling. It's grammar punctuation and spelling was better than most first drafts I got from my students! That said, ChatGPT did not excel at visual storytelling. 3 points.

Total Score: 15 points. That's a B!

But was it any good? Absolutely not! Although it hit all the marks demanded by the grading rubric, the script was little more than a trite collection of cliches and tropes. The difference between adequate words on a page and great screenwriting is something I call sparkle. ChatGPT didn't come within a mile of sparkle. However, I am happy to report that there was always at least one student in my class that possessed it.

I honestly believe a few of my students had the raw talent needed to become professional screenwriters, if they stuck with it. I am less optimistic about ChatGPT, but there's no denying it would pass my class.

If I taught today, I suspect a lot of the assignments I would get will have been written by AI and simply reformatted. That's kind of scary when you think about it. How could a teacher possibly guard against that?

I've beaten ChatGPT up quite a bit. Now let's see how Bard would do with the same prompt: "Write a screenplay about a World War II pilot worried about dying on a mission."

Here's the Bard version:

Scene 1

INT. PLANE - DAY

A young pilot, JACK, sits in the cockpit of a World War II fighter plane. He is sweating and his hands are shaking.

JACK (to himself) I can't do this. I can't die.

Scene 2

EXT. SKY - DAY

The plane takes off and soars into the sky. Jack looks down at the ground below and sees the vastness of the ocean. He feels a wave of nausea wash over him.

JACK (to himself) I'm going to die.

Scene 3

INT. PLANE - DAY

Jack looks over at his co-pilot, who is calm and collected.

JACK (to co-pilot) How can you be so calm?

CO-PILOT Because I've done this a hundred times before.

JACK But what if something goes wrong? What if we get shot down?

CO-PILOT Then we die. But that's a risk we all take when we sign up to fly these missions.

JACK I don't want to die.

CO-PILOT No one wants to die, Jack. But sometimes it's a necessary sacrifice.

Jack looks out the window again and sees the enemy ships in the distance. He takes a deep breath and tries to calm his nerves.

JACK I'm ready.

Scene 4

EXT. SKY - DAY

The plane dives towards the enemy ships. Jack opens fire with his machine guns. The enemy ships return fire, but the plane is unharmed.

JACK We're doing it!

Scene 5

INT. PLANE - DAY

The plane flies back to base. Jack and his co-pilot are greeted as heroes.

JACK (to co-pilot) I can't believe we made it.

CO-PILOT I told you you'd be fine.

Jack smiles and shakes his head. He's glad to be alive.

JACK Thank you.

CO-PILOT For what?

JACK For saving my life.

CO-PILOT It was my pleasure.

Jack and his co-pilot walk off the runway, arm in arm. They've survived another mission, and they're both one step closer to home.

Wow. Not as good. No real descriptions. Less detail. Not as accurate. I mean, what kind of fighter was this? There were plenty of World War II two-seater fighters, but I don't think there were any with co-pilots sitting side-by-side. Also, I would have to downgrade the formatting simply because of the scene numbering. Also, how did the Co-Pilot save our hero's life? With the most mediocre pep talk in history? Nah, I don't buy this at all.

Let's grade Bard:

1). Protagonist: Description, Motivation, Action. Lackluster portrayal. 1 point.

2). Antagonist/Conflict: Description, Motivation, Action. Lackluster. 1 point.

3). Dramatic Structure: Setup, Development & Climax/Resolution. It had a beginning middle and end, but it was utterly uncompelling and the resolution felt unearned. 2 points.

4). Format: Script format was specified by the instructor & text. For reasons I mentioned earlier, I am giving the program the benefit of the doubt. However, I am downgrading it one point for the inappropriate scene numbering. 3 points.

5). Writing: Grammar, Punctuation, Spelling, Visual storytelling. Grammar punctuation and spelling were fine. No attempt at visual storytelling. 3 points.

Total Score: 10 points. That's still a C!

Bard would pass my class too. Yikes. That's scary.

Final Thoughts. Neither story rose to the sparkle level. Not even close. I didn't find anything really compelling or genuinely heartfelt in either of them. I think the programs will eventually be able to generate compelling plots, but I don't see the beginning of true human characterization in them yet. Compelling characters speak to our deepest needs and concerns. We want to see ourselves in the story. That's the talent great writers provide.

My old creative director at the advertising agency Smith Burke & Azzam, Jeff Millman, had a little placard on his desk which read: Who Cares? If you handed him a script that he didn't find compelling, he would simply point to it.

I know where Jeff would be pointing if he read these scripts.....

Still, the current abilities of ChatGPT are somewhat disconcerting. Still, many of my creative friends console themselves because they say the program cannot come up with the initial ideas. We'll see about that in an upcoming blog!

My novel Chapel Street is now available! You can buy the Kindle and paperback at Amazon and the Nook, paperback and hardcover at Barnes & Noble. Chapel Street is the tale of a young man battling a demonic entity that has driven members of his family to suicide for generations. It was inspired by an actual haunting.

Learn more about the book, click Here.

Listen to me read some chapters here:

Chapel Street - Prologue - My Mother

Chapel Street - Chapter 1 - RestingPlace.com

Chapel Street - Chapter 2 - Elisabetta

Chapel Street - Chapter 3 - The Upload

Chapel Street - Chapter 4 - The Kobayashi Maru

Read about the true haunting that inspired the novel here:

The Haunting of 21 St. Helens Avenue, Part 24, Bad News Betty

The Haunting of 21 St. Helens Avenue, Part 25, Joe's Tale

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Wednesday, May 10, 2023

ChatGPT makes $hit up!

I have been testing ChatGPT's Open AI program with simple tasks like writing loglines and I have been impressed. I initially became interested in the program after a professional writer friend of mine told me he was using a different AI program, Jasper, to write blogs for his clients on various subjects. Was artificial intelligence going to render us writers irrelevant? I decided to give Open AI a more difficult task to find out. I asked it to write my biography for a blog. Here are the results. I will embolden things it found itself and got right, and italicize things it got wrong.

Before I go any further, I want to say I am not famous. However, I am a public figure. Google me and you will find page after page of information -- more than I would probably like you to know! I have written a couple of books and a number of movies, all of which have been reviewed by critics and consumers. There's a lot about me on the internet. This should not be a difficult task....

Here's my initial request: "Write me a blog about the work of author and screenwriter Sean Paul Murphy."

1st Attempt, 1st Request:

Sean Paul Murphy is a talented author and screenwriter who has made significant contributions to the world of literature and film. With his unique style and compelling stories, he has captured the attention of readers and viewers around the world. In this blog, we will take a closer look at his work and explore some of the reasons why he has become such a respected and beloved figure in the entertainment industry.

Sean Paul Murphy's Early Life and Career

Sean Paul Murphy was born in the United States and grew up in a small town in Ohio. From a young age, he had a passion for writing and storytelling. After completing his education, he moved to Los Angeles to pursue a career in the entertainment industry.

In the early years of his career, Sean Paul Murphy worked as a screenwriter, penning scripts for a variety of television shows and movies. Some of his notable credits include episodes of the hit shows "Law & Order: SVU" and "CSI: NY." He also worked on several independent films, including the critically acclaimed "A Light Beneath Their Feet."

Sean Paul Murphy's Writing Style

Sean Paul Murphy is known for his ability to craft compelling stories that are both entertaining and thought-provoking. His writing style is characterized by its authenticity, depth, and emotional resonance. Whether he is writing a screenplay or a novel, his work is always engaging and memorable.

One of the things that sets Sean Paul Murphy's writing apart is his ability to create fully realized characters. His protagonists are always complex and multidimensional, with flaws and strengths that make them feel like real people. He also has a talent for creating vivid and immersive settings, which transport readers and viewers into the world of his stories.

Sean Paul Murphy's Work in Literature

In addition to his work in screenwriting, Sean Paul Murphy is also a prolific author. He has written several novels, including "The Time of New Weather," "The Promise of Eden," and "The Finished Man." His books are known for their compelling storytelling, rich characters, and unique perspectives on the human experience.

"The Time of New Weather," for example, is a post-apocalyptic novel set in a world where climate change has ravaged the planet. The story follows a group of survivors as they try to build a new society in the aftermath of a global catastrophe. It's a gripping and thought-provoking read that explores important themes like environmentalism, social justice, and the resilience of the human spirit.

Sean Paul Murphy's Impact on the Entertainment Industry

Sean Paul Murphy's contributions to the entertainment industry have been significant. His screenplays and films have earned critical acclaim and won awards at film festivals around the world. His novels have also been well-received, earning him a loyal following of readers.

But perhaps the most important impact Sean Paul Murphy has had is in the way he has inspired others to pursue their creative passions. Through his work, he has shown that it's possible to tell meaningful and engaging stories that can have a real impact on the world. His legacy will undoubtedly continue to inspire future generations of writers and filmmakers for years to come.

Conclusion

Sean Paul Murphy is a talented author and screenwriter whose work has made a significant impact on the entertainment industry. With his unique style and compelling stories, he has captured the hearts and minds of readers and viewers around the world. Whether he is writing a novel or a screenplay, his work is always thought-provoking and emotionally resonant. As he continues to create new and exciting stories, we can't wait to see what he has in store for us next.

Okay, that was strange. There was no screenwriting Sean Murphy who wrote on all of those television shows. When it came to the books, a Sean Murphy did write a book called "The Time of New Weather," but, as best I can make out, those other books simply do not exist. That said, I thought there was something warm and homely about my non-existent small town Ohio upbringing. I decided to give a program a second shot.

2nd Attempt, 1st request:

Sean Paul Murphy is a prolific author and screenwriter, known for his ability to craft gripping stories that keep readers and viewers on the edge of their seats. With over 20 years of experience in the entertainment industry, Murphy has established himself as a respected and sought-after writer, with a body of work that spans across various genres and mediums.

Murphy’s early career was marked by his work as a staff writer for popular television shows such as “The Twilight Zone,” “Law & Order,” and “Star Trek: Voyager.” He quickly made a name for himself as a skilled writer who could bring depth and nuance to even the most challenging of stories. His writing was often praised for its attention to detail and its ability to capture the complexities of human nature.

In the years since, Murphy has branched out into writing books and screenplays. He has written several books, including the critically acclaimed mystery novel “The Time of New Weather,” which was praised for its intricate plot and vivid descriptions of characters and settings. Murphy has also written several screenplays, including the action-thriller “Chaos Theory” and the sci-fi adventure “The Lost City.”

Murphy’s ability to write across various genres has made him a sought-after writer in Hollywood. He has worked with some of the biggest names in the industry, including Steven Spielberg and J.J. Abrams. His work has been optioned by major studios and production companies, and he has been commissioned to write screenplays for some of the biggest franchises in film and television.

One of Murphy’s greatest strengths as a writer is his ability to create complex, multi-dimensional characters. His characters are often flawed and complicated, with their own unique motivations and desires. He is also skilled at building tension and suspense throughout his stories, keeping readers and viewers engaged from beginning to end.

Murphy’s work has been widely praised by critics and audiences alike. He has been nominated for several awards, including the Emmy and the Edgar Award for Best Television Episode Teleplay. His books have been praised for their compelling characters and intricate plots, and his screenplays have been praised for their cinematic quality and gripping storytelling.

In conclusion, Sean Paul Murphy is a talented and accomplished writer whose work spans across various genres and mediums. His ability to craft complex characters and build tension and suspense has made him a sought-after writer in Hollywood, and his books and screenplays have been widely praised by critics and audiences alike. As he continues to produce new works, it is clear that Murphy’s legacy as a talented storyteller will only continue to grow.

I liked that biography better. It made me much more impressive. However, once again, the AI is simply making stuff up. I could understand if there was another Sean Murphy writing for "The Twilight Zone" and movies like "Chaos Theory" and "The Lost City," but there isn't one. That's all BS. Also, although my work has won Emmys, I never won one myself personally.

Okay, okay. I decided to become more specific. I changed my request to: "Write me a blog about "Sean Paul Murphy," the author of the books "Chapel Street" and "The Promise, or the Pros and Cons of Talking with God," and the screenwriter of films like "21 Eyes," "Sarah's Choice," "The Encounter" and "Revelation Road.""

1st Attempt, 2nd Request:

Sean Paul Murphy is a prolific author and screenwriter who has made a significant impact in the world of literature and film. He is the author of two widely acclaimed novels, "Chapel Street" and "The Promise, or the Pros and Cons of Talking with God," and has written screenplays for several successful movies, including "21 Eyes," "Sarah's Choice," "The Encounter," and "Revelation Road."

Born in Illinois, Murphy grew up in a small town where he developed a love for reading and writing at an early age. He pursued his passion for writing by studying creative writing at Southern Illinois University, where he received a Bachelor of Fine Arts degree. After graduation, Murphy moved to Los Angeles to pursue a career in screenwriting.

Murphy's first screenplay was the thriller "21 Eyes," which received critical acclaim and won several awards at film festivals. He followed that up with "Sarah's Choice," a powerful drama about a woman's struggle with an unplanned pregnancy, which was praised for its heartfelt performances and powerful message.

Murphy's work as a screenwriter continued to gain recognition, and he soon became known for his ability to create stories that were both engaging and thought-provoking. He went on to write several more successful films, including "The Encounter," a supernatural drama about a group of strangers who are forced to confront their beliefs, and "Revelation Road," an action-packed thriller about a man's journey through a post-apocalyptic world.

In addition to his work as a screenwriter, Murphy has also written two novels that have garnered critical acclaim. His debut novel, "Chapel Street," is a gritty, powerful tale of life on the streets of Chicago. The book was praised for its realistic portrayal of the city's underbelly and its well-drawn characters. Murphy's second novel, "The Promise, or the Pros and Cons of Talking with God," is a philosophical exploration of faith and spirituality that has been described as both profound and engaging.

Overall, Sean Paul Murphy is a talented writer whose work has captivated audiences both on the page and on the screen. His ability to tell compelling stories that explore important themes has made him a respected figure in the world of literature and film, and his fans eagerly anticipate his next project. Whether writing novels or screenplays, Murphy has a unique voice and a deep understanding of the human condition that shines through in all of his work.

Okay, that was a little closer because I gave it more clues. So I pushed the button again.

2nd Attempt, 2nd Request:

Sean Paul Murphy is a multi-talented artist with an impressive career as both a writer and a screenwriter. He is the author of two thought-provoking books, "Chapel Street" and "The Promise, or the Pros and Cons of Talking with God," and the screenwriter of several successful films, including "21 Eyes," "Sarah's Choice," "The Encounter," and "Revelation Road." His work showcases his ability to create compelling narratives that explore complex themes and ideas.

Born in Boston, Massachusetts, Murphy's love for storytelling began at an early age. He went on to study screenwriting at Boston University's College of Communication before moving to Los Angeles to pursue a career in the film industry. He soon began writing screenplays, with his first film, "The Encounter," released in 2010.

One of Murphy's most notable works is his novel "Chapel Street," which tells the story of a young man struggling with addiction and homelessness on the streets of Boston. The book received critical acclaim and was praised for its raw portrayal of the realities of homelessness and addiction. Murphy's ability to craft a compelling narrative while tackling difficult subjects is a testament to his skill as a writer.

In "The Promise, or the Pros and Cons of Talking with God," Murphy explores the concept of faith and the ways in which it can impact our lives. The book follows a man who is faced with a life-changing decision after having a conversation with God. The story poses thought-provoking questions about the nature of faith and spirituality, and how it can guide our choices and actions.

As a screenwriter, Murphy has worked on several successful films, including "21 Eyes," a thriller about a group of strangers who find themselves trapped in a mysterious room with 21 surveillance cameras, and "Sarah's Choice," a drama about a young woman facing an unexpected pregnancy. His work often deals with challenging topics, such as faith, redemption, and morality, and his ability to handle these themes with sensitivity and nuance is a testament to his talent as a storyteller.

In addition to his writing, Murphy is also a dedicated teacher and mentor. He has taught screenwriting at Boston University, UCLA, and Loyola Marymount University, and has helped to guide and inspire countless aspiring writers.

Overall, Sean Paul Murphy is a writer and screenwriter who is known for his ability to create compelling stories that explore complex themes and ideas. His work is a testament to the power of storytelling and the impact it can have on our lives. Whether through his novels or his films, Murphy's storytelling ability has made a lasting impact on audiences around the world.

Some improvements. It realized "21 Eyes" was about surveillance cameras, and that I taught screenwriting, but a lot of the material still seemed to come out of thin air. I decided to re-focus the program.

Here's my new request: "Write me a blog about Baltimore-born and Towson University educated "Sean Paul Murphy," the author of the books "Chapel Street" and "The Promise, or the Pros and Cons of Talking with God," and the screenwriter of films like "21 Eyes," "Sarah's Choice," "The Encounter" and "Revelation Road."

1st Attempt, 3rd Request:

Sean Paul Murphy is a talented author and screenwriter who was born and raised in Baltimore, Maryland. He attended Towson University, where he received a Bachelor of Science in Mass Communications and a Master of Arts in Professional Writing.

Murphy's passion for writing began at a young age. He wrote his first novel, "Chapel Street," while he was still in college. The book was published in 1997 and received critical acclaim for its authentic portrayal of life in the inner city. "Chapel Street" tells the story of a group of friends living in the tough neighborhoods of Baltimore who are forced to confront their deepest fears and secrets when one of them is killed.

Murphy's second novel, "The Promise, or the Pros and Cons of Talking with God," was published in 2001. This book is a thought-provoking exploration of the nature of faith and the complexities of belief. It tells the story of a man who claims to have spoken with God and the reactions of those around him as he tries to convince them of the truth of his experience.

In addition to his successful career as a novelist, Sean Paul Murphy has also made a name for himself as a screenwriter. He has written several feature films, including "21 Eyes," "Sarah's Choice," "The Encounter," and "Revelation Road." These films have been praised for their engaging storytelling, memorable characters, and thought-provoking themes.

"21 Eyes" is a crime drama about a group of friends who get involved in a dangerous game of Russian roulette. "Sarah's Choice" is a powerful drama about a young woman facing an unplanned pregnancy and the difficult decisions she must make. "The Encounter" is a spiritual drama that explores the concept of divine intervention, while "Revelation Road" is an action-packed thriller about a man's journey to find his family in the midst of a post-apocalyptic world.

Overall, Sean Paul Murphy's work has been praised for its compelling storytelling and thought-provoking themes. He is a talented writer who has made a significant impact on both the literary and film worlds. His ability to create engaging characters and explore complex themes has earned him a loyal following of fans and admirers. As he continues to produce new works, it will be exciting to see what he has in store for his audience in the years to come.

I like how it just invents things! I gave the request another try.

2nd Attempt, 3 Request:

Sean Paul Murphy is a Baltimore-born and Towson University educated author and screenwriter known for his compelling storytelling and unique perspectives on faith and spirituality. With a diverse body of work that spans books and films, Murphy has established himself as a force to be reckoned with in the world of entertainment.

Born and raised in Baltimore, Maryland, Murphy discovered his love for writing at a young age. He attended Towson University, where he honed his craft and developed his voice as a writer. After graduating, he began his career as a screenwriter, penning scripts for a number of independent films.

Murphy's first feature film, "21 Eyes," was released in 2003 and quickly gained critical acclaim. The film, which tells the story of a group of people whose lives intersect in unexpected ways, showcased Murphy's talent for creating complex, relatable characters and weaving together multiple plotlines.

In the years that followed, Murphy continued to write and produce films that explored themes of faith, redemption, and the human experience. His films "Sarah's Choice," "The Encounter," and "Revelation Road" all earned widespread praise for their thought-provoking storylines and powerful messages.

In addition to his work in film, Murphy is also an accomplished author. His debut novel, "Chapel Street," was published in 2016 and was hailed as a masterful work of fiction. Set in a small town in rural America, the novel tells the story of a group of people whose lives are forever changed when a mysterious stranger comes to town.

Murphy's second novel, "The Promise, or the Pros and Cons of Talking with God," was released in 2019 and delves even deeper into themes of faith and spirituality. The novel tells the story of a man who discovers that he has the ability to talk to God, and must grapple with the consequences of this newfound power.

What sets Murphy's work apart is his ability to explore complex issues with nuance and sensitivity. Whether through his novels or his films, he tackles weighty subjects with a deft touch and a deep understanding of the human experience.

Today, Sean Paul Murphy continues to create thought-provoking and inspiring works that resonate with audiences around the world. His unique voice and powerful storytelling make him one of the most exciting and dynamic voices in contemporary literature and film.

3rd Attempt, 3rd Request:

Sean Paul Murphy is a multi-talented author and screenwriter, born in Baltimore and educated at Towson University. He has made a name for himself in the entertainment industry with his gripping stories and thought-provoking scripts.

Murphy's first novel, "Chapel Street," was released in 2005 to critical acclaim. The book tells the story of a young man who returns to his hometown and discovers that his best friend has been murdered. As he investigates the crime, he is forced to confront his own demons and secrets. "Chapel Street" is a masterful work of suspense and psychological drama that showcases Murphy's skill at creating complex, flawed characters.

In 2009, Murphy published his second novel, "The Promise, or the Pros and Cons of Talking with God." This book explores the question of whether God is truly present in our lives, and what it means to have a conversation with the divine. Through the eyes of the book's protagonist, Murphy explores the nature of faith and the complexities of the human experience.

Murphy's talents as a screenwriter have also been widely recognized. He has written for a number of feature films, including "21 Eyes," "Sarah's Choice," "The Encounter," and "Revelation Road." In these films, Murphy tackles a range of issues, from addiction to the importance of family to the nature of spirituality. His scripts are notable for their strong character development and emotional depth.

One of Murphy's most acclaimed works is "The Encounter," a film about a group of strangers who find themselves trapped in a diner during a fierce storm. As they wait for the storm to pass, they are confronted by a mysterious stranger who challenges them to confront their deepest fears and regrets. "The Encounter" is a powerful meditation on the human experience and the role of faith in our lives.

Murphy's work has been recognized by a number of industry awards, including the prestigious Angel Award for Excellence in Media. He has also been featured in a variety of media outlets, including The Huffington Post, The Christian Post, and Movieguide.

Despite his success, Murphy remains grounded and committed to his craft. He continues to write and create, always pushing himself to explore new ideas and themes. His work is a testament to the power of storytelling and the enduring impact of great art.

Once again, the program lucks into some accurate points that I didn't feed it, but it still makes up some outrageous BS. I decided to hone my question further with the hope that the more information I gave it, the more accurate the result would be.

A new request: "Write me a blog about Baltimore-born and Towson University educated "Sean Paul Murphy," the author of the 2020 horror novel "Chapel Street" and his 2014 memoir "The Promise, or the Pros and Cons of Talking with God," and the screenwriter of films like "21 Eyes," "Sarah's Choice," "The Encounter" and "Revelation Road.""

1st Attempt, 4th Request:

Sean Paul Murphy is a multi-talented artist born and raised in Baltimore, Maryland. He is the author of several novels and memoirs, a screenwriter, and a filmmaker. Murphy’s works have been well received by both critics and audiences alike.

Murphy’s early life was spent in Baltimore, where he attended Loyola Blakefield High School before going on to study at Towson University. It was during his time at Towson that Murphy discovered his passion for writing, and he began to hone his craft by writing short stories and screenplays.

After college, Murphy moved to Los Angeles to pursue his career in the film industry. He landed his first job as a production assistant on the television series "Nash Bridges," which starred Don Johnson. From there, he worked his way up the ranks, eventually becoming a screenwriter and director.

Murphy’s first feature film screenplay was "21 Eyes," a thriller about a man who can see into the future. The film was directed by Kees Van Oostrum and starred Steve Oedekerk and Olivia Hussey. The film received critical acclaim and won several awards at film festivals.

In 2009, Murphy wrote the screenplay for the pro-life drama "Sarah’s Choice." The film, directed by Chad Kapper and starring Rebecca St. James, explored the difficult decisions women face when dealing with unplanned pregnancies. The film was well-received by audiences and earned Murphy a nomination for Best Screenplay at the Gospel Music Association Dove Awards.

Murphy’s next project was "The Encounter," a supernatural thriller about a group of strangers who are forced to confront their sins when they become trapped in a diner by a mysterious force. The film was directed by David A.R. White and starred Bruce Marchiano and Gary Daniels. The Encounter was a box office success and spawned two sequels.

In addition to his film work, Murphy is also an accomplished author. His 2014 memoir, "The Promise, or the Pros and Cons of Talking with God," chronicled his own struggles with faith and spirituality. The book was praised for its honesty and vulnerability, and it received positive reviews from critics.

In 2020, Murphy released his debut horror novel, "Chapel Street." The novel, set in a small town in Maryland, tells the story of a group of teenagers who uncover a dark secret about their town’s past. The book was well-received by horror fans and was praised for its suspenseful plot and well-drawn characters.

Murphy’s success as a writer and filmmaker is a testament to his talent and hard work. He continues to create thought-provoking and entertaining works that resonate with audiences. As he continues to develop his career, it will be exciting to see what new stories he has in store for us.

Wow. That bio actually made me look up to see if I earned a nomination for a Dove Award for "Sarah's Choice." (I didn't. The competition didn't offer screenplay awards!) Once again, giving the program more information didn't prevent it was making a bunch of stuff up.

2nd Attempt, 4th Request:

Sean Paul Murphy is a versatile artist who has made a name for himself in the entertainment industry as a writer, screenwriter, and author. Born and raised in Baltimore, Maryland, Murphy attended Towson University, where he developed his skills in writing, film, and media studies.

Murphy's writing career began with his 2014 memoir, "The Promise, or the Pros and Cons of Talking with God," which chronicles his personal journey of faith and spirituality. In this thought-provoking and candid memoir, Murphy explores his experiences with organized religion, his struggles with addiction, and his eventual path to recovery.

After the success of his memoir, Murphy turned his attention to writing horror fiction. In 2020, he published his debut novel, "Chapel Street," which tells the story of a young couple who move into an old house on Chapel Street, only to discover that it is haunted by the spirits of its former occupants. The novel has been praised for its suspenseful plot and vivid descriptions, and has been hailed as a must-read for horror fans.

In addition to his writing, Murphy has also made a name for himself as a screenwriter. His credits include the films "21 Eyes," "Sarah's Choice," "The Encounter," and "Revelation Road." These films cover a range of genres, from drama to horror to science fiction, showcasing Murphy's versatility and range as a writer.

Murphy's writing is marked by its emotional depth, authenticity, and the powerful sense of spirituality that underpins his work. He is known for his ability to capture the complexity of the human experience and to explore the themes of faith, redemption, and the supernatural.

Overall, Sean Paul Murphy is a talented and accomplished artist whose work is both thought-provoking and entertaining. Whether he is writing about his personal journey of faith or crafting chilling horror stories, Murphy's work always reflects his commitment to exploring the human experience in all its complexity. His unique voice and perspective continue to captivate audiences and leave a lasting impact on those who encounter his work.

This short bio was the most accurate. I decided to recalibrate one more time. I am adding the publisher of my books and the director of "21 Eyes" with the hope of achieving a more accurate result. (The TouchPoint Press website features a biography of me. Hopefully the program will catch it.)

Here's my new request: "Write me a blog about Baltimore-born and Towson University educated "Sean Paul Murphy," the author of the 2020 horror novel "Chapel Street," published by TouchPoint Press and his 2014 memoir "The Promise, or the Pros and Cons of Talking with God," also published by TouchPoint Press. He is also the screenwriter of films like "21 Eyes," directed by Lee Bonner, "Sarah's Choice," "The Encounter" and "Revelation Road.""

1st Attempt, 5th Request:

Sean Paul Murphy is a Baltimore-born writer and screenwriter who has made a name for himself in the world of horror and faith-based films. His creative talents have led him to write several novels, including the 2020 horror novel "Chapel Street," and a memoir titled "The Promise, or the Pros and Cons of Talking with God," published by TouchPoint Press.

Murphy graduated from Towson University and began his writing career as a journalist, covering local news in Maryland. His interest in storytelling soon led him to explore other forms of writing, including screenplays and novels.

One of Murphy's most notable achievements is his work as a screenwriter. He has written for several films, including "21 Eyes," directed by Lee Bonner, "Sarah's Choice," "The Encounter," and "Revelation Road." These films have been well-received by audiences and critics alike, and have showcased Murphy's ability to craft compelling stories that resonate with viewers.

In addition to his screenwriting work, Murphy has also written two books that have been published by TouchPoint Press. His 2014 memoir, "The Promise, or the Pros and Cons of Talking with God," is a deeply personal account of his spiritual journey and the challenges he faced along the way. The book has been praised for its honesty and vulnerability, and has resonated with readers who have struggled with their own faith.

Murphy's most recent book, "Chapel Street," is a horror novel that explores the dark side of small-town America. The book follows a group of teenagers who stumble upon a mysterious house on Chapel Street and soon discover that it holds a dark secret. "Chapel Street" has been praised for its suspenseful plot, vivid imagery, and well-developed characters.

Overall, Sean Paul Murphy is a talented writer who has made a significant impact in the worlds of horror and faith-based films. His ability to craft compelling stories that resonate with audiences has made him a rising star in the industry, and his future work is sure to be eagerly anticipated by fans and critics alike.

Closer but still no cigar. I liked the journalism angle. I originally majored in journalism, but switched to film. I never really worked as a journalist!

After this test, I'm not concerned about being replaced by artificial intelligence. That might happen someday, but I don't think it's going to be happening anytime soon.

And I certainly wouldn't want to create blogs for paying clients using data from ChatGPT!

Learn more about the book, click Here.

Listen to me read some chapters here:

Chapel Street - Prologue - My Mother

Chapel Street - Chapter 1 - RestingPlace.com

Chapel Street - Chapter 2 - Elisabetta

Chapel Street - Chapter 3 - The Upload

Chapel Street - Chapter 4 - The Kobayashi Maru

Read about the true haunting that inspired the novel here:

The Haunting of 21 St. Helens Avenue, Part 24, Bad News Betty

The Haunting of 21 St. Helens Avenue, Part 25, Joe's Tale

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Friday, February 24, 2023

FINAL TABLE: AI Generated Loglines

Writers have always spent a great deal of time crafting the perfect logline. Those days are coming to an end. It looks like that task can now be safely handled over to over to an artificial intelligence program.

I just put ChatGPT to the test. I gave it a brief summary of my script Final Table, which I wrote with my lovely wife Deborah, and let the computer come up with a logline. Some of them were quite good. Take a look.

Here's what I loaded into the chat window:

Make a logline for this script. Nine people awaken to find themselves at the final table of a deadly Texas Hold 'Em poker tournament presided over by a wry but mysterious dealer.

None of the participants know where they are or how they got there. Their memories are vague at best. Initially, they only remember basic information about themselves like their names, where they lived and their occupations. However, as the game continues, they all become haunted by visions seemingly of their own deaths.

Our hero is Gary Pentz, a Chicago police detective. As he plays, he realizes that he was a corrupt cop. He comes to believe he was killed by a drug dealer who refused to pay him protection money. He suspects that everyone at the table is dead, and he struggles to understand the meaning of the game.

Gary's chief ally is Brittany Brindle. She's a housewife with visions of bleeding out as she crawls across a floor. She seems out of place with the rough crowd at the table. Gary tries to protect her, but she proves wilier than he can imagine.

Ryan DiNunzio, funny but proud and ruthless, feels most comfortable at the table. A professional poker player, Ryan leaves the metaphysics to the others. He knows losing means death so he intends to win at any cost.

The players wrestle with the dynamics of the situation while trying to beat the others. Are they dead? Are they simply A-I simulations? Or are they entertaining rich decadents watching remotely? And what will the winner receive, aside from a stack of chips?

The clock is running and blinds are rising. Will anyone survive long enough to get the answers?

Here are the resulting loglines:

1). "In a deadly Texas Hold 'Em tournament, nine strangers are forced to confront their pasts and fight for their lives while trying to decipher the enigmatic motivations of their mysterious dealer."

2). "A corrupt cop, a housewife, and a professional poker player must navigate a deadly Texas Hold 'Em tournament, haunted by visions of their own deaths, in a desperate attempt to uncover the truth behind their mysterious situation and survive until the end, all while being presided over by a wry but enigmatic dealer."

3). "In a deadly game of Texas Hold 'Em, nine strangers awaken at the final table with vague memories of their lives and haunting visions of their own deaths. Chicago detective Gary Pentz realizes he was a corrupt cop and suspects that everyone at the table is already dead. With the help of housewife Brittany Brindle and professional poker player Ryan DiNunzio, they struggle to understand the rules of the game and whether they are dead, simulations, or being watched by decadent viewers. As the clock ticks and blinds rise, they must not only beat each other but also uncover the truth before it's too late."

4). "When nine strangers wake up at the final table of a deadly poker tournament, they realize that their memories are hazy and their lives are in danger. With haunting visions of their own deaths, they must unravel the mysteries of their predicament before it's too late, all while trying to outwit each other and win the ultimate prize."

5). "When nine strangers awaken at the final table of a deadly Texas Hold 'Em tournament with no memory of how they got there, they must confront their own dark pasts and haunted visions to survive against each other and a wry, mysterious dealer, all while questioning the true nature of their existence and the ultimate prize at stake."

6). "In a deadly Texas Hold 'Em poker tournament, nine strangers awaken at the final table with no memory of how they got there, haunted by visions of their own deaths. As they grapple with their past and the metaphysics of their situation, a corrupt cop, a housewife, and a ruthless poker player struggle to survive and uncover the truth before time runs out."

7). "A group of strangers wake up at a deadly Texas Hold 'Em poker tournament with haunting visions of their own deaths, and must compete to stay alive while unraveling the mystery of their circumstances, all under the watchful eye of a wry and mysterious dealer."

8). "In a deadly game of Texas Hold 'Em, nine strangers find themselves at the final table, haunted by visions of their own deaths. With memories vague and the stakes high, they struggle to survive and unravel the mystery of their existence while a wry but mysterious dealer presides over the game."

9). "In a deadly game of poker, nine strangers awaken at the final table with vague memories and haunting visions of their own deaths. As they play, they struggle to uncover the truth behind their situation while battling for their lives. Chicago detective Gary Pentz discovers his own corruption and must protect unlikely ally, housewife Brittany Brindle, while professional player Ryan DiNunzio plays to win at any cost. With time running out and the stakes getting higher, who will survive to uncover the game's true purpose?"

Frankly, I am impressed. I think the program produced some great loglines that need very little tweaking.

I'll have to try it out with another script....

You can read Final Table here:

Learn more about the book, click Here.

Listen to me read some chapters here:

Chapel Street - Prologue - My Mother

Chapel Street - Chapter 1 - RestingPlace.com

Chapel Street - Chapter 2 - Elisabetta

Chapel Street - Chapter 3 - The Upload

Chapel Street - Chapter 4 - The Kobayashi Maru

Read about the true haunting that inspired the novel here: