Sean Paul Murphy, Writer

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Wednesday, August 4, 2021

Writer Tip #32: Screenwriting Contests

I have a lot of screenwriting friends on various social media platforms and it seems like every day at least one of them, usually more than one, announces that they just became a semi-finalist, finalist or the winner in a screenwriting contest. Of course, I congratulate them. Then I check out the contests. Usually, they are associated with obscure film festivals. Usually, I have never heard of them.

Am I happy my friends won the competitions? Yes, of course. Do I think their wins will forward their careers or help get their screenplay produced? Absolutely not. 

The heads of the studios and the top agents at CAA and WME aren't monitoring the results of the screenplay competition at the Muncie Indie Film Fest. Trust me, if you won that award and boasted about it in a query letter to one of those power brokers, their first thought will be at most: "Muncie? Hmmm. Is that in Illinois or Indiana?" It definitely will not be: "I must read this script IMMEDIATELY!"

I remember taking my first produced feature 21 Eyes to its first film festival. We were up against another film that had won first prize in a film festival a few weeks earlier. I wasn't intimidated because I was familiar with the other festival. It was very small. It wouldn't be totally inaccurate to say it was eight guys watching DVDs in a club room. Still, it was a recognized film festival and that legitimized the award. I am certain when that writer/director dies, the first paragraph of his obituary will include the words "award-winning filmmaker."

The film itself was never professionally released.

But he'll be an award-winning filmmaker forever.

Trust me. That's the true value of 99% of all screenwriting competitions. They are simply ego strokes.* There are literally hundreds of screenwriting contests but less than twenty have any industry value whatsoever.

Before I go any further, let me tell you about my experiences with film festivals. When I began writing there were very few competitions. In retrospect, I wish I had submitted to The Nicholls Fellowship when I was still qualified to do so. That's one of the few competitions that actually enhances careers. I hear all of the winners and finalists end up with agents or managers. I could have done well there with my early scripts because they fell into the kind of subject matter the Fellowship seems to favor. 

The first screenplay competition I entered was the Slamdance Horror Competition. As a prize, the winning script would be produced. I was a semi-finalist. I checked out my fellow semi-finalists. I was surprised to see that many of them were produced screenwriters, like myself. I felt like I was in good company. But I didn't win. 

The second contest I entered was MovieGuide's Kairos Prize for Spiritually Uplifting Screenplays. I wouldn't have entered it if a friend of mine hadn't suggested it a few times. That said, the contest was appealing to me. Based on the produced films in the genre, I didn't think the competition would be too great or too intimidating. Plus, they were giving out $50,000. That's real money. I entered and I was one of the winners -- 2nd runner up. I got a check for $10,000 and an all expense paid trip for my wife and myself to Hollywood for the awards ceremony. It was an absolutely fantastic experience.  Read about it here: Winning The Kairos Prize.

The awards show was actually televised on the Hallmark Channel, but they cut out awarding the screenwriting prize for time. (Get used to that, screenwriters!) Here's a video of the screenplay winners winning their awards:

 

Finally, I entered The Baltimore Film Office Screenplay Competition. Twice. Why not? It's my hometown contest. The first year I entered my script that had already been a semi-finalist in the much more competitive Slamdance Horror Competition. I thought I was a shoo-in since the script was set in Baltimore and had already garnered professional interest. I lost. I wasn't even a finalist. Why? The judge dismissed it as needlessly violent. Gosh, who'd want to see a violent horror film? The following year I sent them a script about the founding of one of the most famous Italian restaurants in Baltimore's Little Italy. The script was filled with local color, romance and food, and even benefited from an uncredited polish by the Academy Award winning writer/director Barry Levinson. This was a truly viable script. The producers had already blew three separate opportunities at financing. It lost too. Why? Because the judge thought the May/December romance at the heart of the tale was "unbelievable" -- despite the fact it was based on a TRUE STORY.

Idiots.

The funny thing is that I later became one of those idiots myself. I was invited to become a second tier judge on that contest, but that's another story. You can read about it Here. It will give you an inside view of a screenwriting competition.

If you noticed, all of the competitions I entered had a very narrow focus. I have a real problem with the apples and oranges nature of general competitions. I have a certain "wheelhouse" as a writer.  It's drama with comedy. Therefore, none of my non-genre scripts could ever win a contest. My scripts are too light to win against serious dramas and too serious to win against outright comedies. That's why I have only entered competitions with a narrow focus like faith and horror. That mitigates the apples versus oranges problem.

But here's the main reason I don't enter contests: They're bullshit.

I didn't become a screenwriter to win writing contests. I became a screenwriter to make movies!

I'll take one yes from a producer over fifty wins in podunk screenwriting contests any day of the week. You can win one hundred awards from the Chattanooga Micro Cine and Brew Fest without getting one single step closer to making a film.

Don't get distracted! If you want your work to be judged in document form, write a book. If you call yourself a screenwriter, you're not in the word business. You're in the picture business. Your screenplay isn't completed until it is translated into images on a screen.

Keep your eyes on the prize, folks!

To get your first film made within the system, you are probably going to have to get hundreds of nos from agents, managers and producers. Why would you want to compound that negativity with dozens or hundreds of nos from screenplay competitions? To make matters worse, you're going to be paying $35, $50 or $75 per shot for the privilege of being rejected. Forget that. Rejections from producers are free of charge! Collect them all!

"But, Sean," you say, "I want my obituary to read award-winning writer."

Okay, if all you want is an award here's what you do. Go on FilmFreeway.com and find the newest and smallest screenwriting contests. That's where you'll find the least competition. Enter enough of them and you'll eventually get your award. Or, better yet, just enter the WorldFest at the Houston International Film Festival. They have so many filmmaking categories (924!) and they give three awards -- gold, silver and bronze -- in each of them that you're bound to win something.

Then stop entering contests and get back to the business of making movies.

*Okay, okay. I am going to concede a point in favor of contests. Some screenwriters outside of major markets work in isolation. They don't have friends or colleagues knowledgeable in the arcane craft of screenwriting. They enter these contests specifically to get feedback from the readers. I understand that. That makes sense. And it is considerably cheaper than what most professional readers would charge. That said, however, you would have more give and take with a professional reader instead.... (You can find my thoughts on readers on Writing Tip #19.)

Keep writing!

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Monday, August 2, 2021

Yippee-Ki-Yay Mother Podcast #75: Teen Comedy Round Robin

Here's another COVID free ZOOM edition of the Yippee-Ki-Yay Mother Podcast, a lively discussion of the movies that sometimes devolves into a group therapy session.

This week we return again to our cinematic round robin format. The genre: Teen Comedies.  We each brought one of our favorites the table to share with our fellow Mother Podcasters. A lot of fun choices, and some surprising ones too.  Check it out -- and decide for yourself whether Back To The Future is a teen comedy.

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Saturday, July 24, 2021

Well Worth A Read: Chapel Street by Sean Paul Murphy

Well Worth A Read: Chapel Street by Sean Paul Murphy:   Rick Bakos never had a chance at happiness. After enduring the tragic death of his father in a car accident, Rick grew up to helplessly wa...

Thursday, July 22, 2021

Grave Tale #20: Susan Lynn Nasdor


I am an avid genealogist. The past is very important to me. I spend a lot of time in cemeteries photographing tombstones to upload on the website FindAGrave.

I enjoy recognizing long dead people by putting memorials to them online. However, every once and a while something grabs me about a specific grave. It could be the name, or the dates or a ceramic photo. In those cases, I feel compelled to dig a little deeper. That's what this series of blogs is about: The tales behind those graves. Some of my subjects will be heroes. Some will be villains. Some will be victims. And some will linger in between, like most of us. However, don't be surprised if the tales are inherently tragic. These are grave tales. They all end in death.

Every time I turned onto I-95 South from Moravia Road, I could see a large cemetery off to the left but I had no idea what it was called or how to reach it. That's very frustrating for a cemetery junkie like yours truly. Then one day I found myself playing poker with one of the caretakers. He told me that it was Beth Yehuda-Anshe Kurland Congregational Cemetery, and told me how to get there. He said I should visit, and I did. Right near the front I saw the grave of Susan Lynn Nasdor. I was drawn to her grave by her photograph. I felt a pang of sorrow looking at her smiling face. Her age compounded the sense of tragedy. She was dead at sixteen-years-old. I needed to know how this happy young woman lost her life.  

Here's the story:

The Evening Sun (Baltimore, Maryland), 31 December 1969, Wednesday:


Two Killed, Nine Injured As Four Cars
Collide On Jones Falls Expressway

     Two persons died and nine were injured last night in a four-car crash on the Jones Falls expressway when a southbound car carrying Randallstown teen-agers hurtled across a median strip and slammed into two northbound vehicles.
     A fourth automobile piled into the mass of twisted wreckage as it approached the accident scene, just south of the expressway's Northern Parkway exit.
     Police said Susan Nasdor, 16, 3700 block Julian court, Randallstown, and Milton Weiner, 47, of the 3600 block Blair road, Randallstown, the owner of Car City, Inc., a Dodge dealership, were pronounced dead, Miss Nasdor at Union Memorial Hospital and Mr. Weiner, at Sinai Hospital soon after the 9:20 P.M. accident.

Taken To Sinai

     Seven of the injured were taken to Sinai Hospital. Five were treated for minor injuries and released and two twin sisters were admitted with leg fractures.
     Another injured man was taken to Union Memorial Hospital and treated and released.
     Hospital officials identified him as Oscar Schabb, 44, of the 4700 block of Bonnie Brae.
     The driver of the fourth car, William W. Holland, 53, of Sparks, Md., was taken from the scene by ambulance. The extent of his injuries are not known.
     Police have charged the 16-year-old driver of the car the teen-agers were riding in with speeding and reckless driving. Has been identified as Jay Freedman, of the 3700 block Hendon road.

Other Passengers

     Other passengers in the Freedman vehicle were:
     PATRICIA SULLIVAN, 16, was admitted to Sinai with a broken left leg and is in satisfactory condition.
     SUSAN SULLIVAN, Patricia's twin sister, was also admitted with a broken left leg in fair condition. The hospital gave the girls' address as the 800 block Painted Post road, Randallstown.
     GREGORY CAMPBELL, 15, of the 3900 block Tiverton road, Randallstown. Police said that he was riding in the trunk of the car, but added that they had not yet determined why.
     RANDY BROTMAN, 17, of the 2400 block Tranor avenue, Randallstown.
     FRANCINE LEVINE, 16, of the 6600 block Eberle road, Randallstown.
     Police said the accident apparently occurred when the car carrying the teen-agers, including the dead girl, crossed the roadway, flipped across the median strip and landed in the northbound lane.
     The accident occurred in a section of the expressway which has had more wet-weather accidents than any area of the road, Hugh Liem, director of the city Department of Transit and Traffic, said today.
     But when comparing the number of accidents to the vehicles which travel the expressway, the Jones Falls is safer than any "arterial street" in Baltimore, Mr. Liem said.


3rd, 4th Deaths

     The deaths last night were the first this year on the city's portion of the expressway, according to statistics of the Traffic Analysis Unit of the Baltimore police department.
     Seventeen people have died in traffic accidents on the city portion of the expressway since it opened in 1961, police said.
     Mr. Liem said the 0.3 mile stretch of the road, just south of Northern Parkway, is one area of several on the highway "ear-marked" for a process called grooving to prevent hydroplaning by cars on wet pavement.

Grooves In Pavement

     "Test by the federal government have shown that cutting continuous grooves a quarter-inch deep and about an inch apart on the highway can keep vehicles from traveling over the water on a wet road," Mr. Liem said. 
     Mr. Liem said a contract for the grooving is scheduled to be let in February or March and work could begin in the spring. The grooving can be done only on concrete surface, he said.
     Traffic engineers have not been able to determine why the stretch where the accident occurred is more dangerous than the rest of the expressway, he said.
     The teen-agers' car, police said, hurtled in the air and struck Mr. Weiner's car, sheering off the roof, and then slammed into a car driven by Mr. Schabb.


Fourth Car

     The fourth car, police said, apparently slammed into the three-car wreckage as it approached the accident scene.
     The teen-agers' car, police reported, stopped in the northbound lane. Its left side was crushed, its roof indented, and debris from the vehicle was stuck on the guard rail.
     More than 30 police cars responded to control traffic and investigate the mishap that occurred, police said, in a driving rain.
     Northbound traffic on the expressway was diverted at Cold Spring lane until fire and police emergency equipment cleared the scene about midnight.

Wow. That was a truly terrible accident. I'm sure even the survivors were permanently traumatized. I bet none of them could travel down the Jones Falls expressway again without shuddering. At least the newspaper and Baltimore City took the accident seriously, which was an interesting contrast to the death of one of my earlier subjects, Bobbi Jo Eaddy, whose death in an accident was sadly treated like little more than a rush hour annoyance. This time the Sunpapers featured a long detailed story with photographs. More importantly, the city reported that improvements where already being considered to help prevent further accidents, and the police began a serious investigation. Eventually the driver, Jay Freedman, was charged with automobile manslaughter.

Here's the results of the trial:

The Evening Sun (Baltimore, Maryland), 23 July 1970, Thursday:



Court Docket

Youth Cleared in Fatal Crash
By George Hanst

     A 17-year-old driver involved in a collision that took two lives on the Jones Falls expressway December 30 was acquitted yesterday of automobile manslaughter.
    The defendant, Jay L. Freedman, of the 3700 block Hendon road, "was not driving at such an excessive rate of speed as to impute criminal intent," Judge Anselm Sodaro wrote in a five-page opinion in Criminal Court.
     Judge Sodaro said simple negligence is not enough to prove auto manslaughter under Maryland law, which requires a showing of gross negligence and a wanton disregard for another's life.
     Young Freedman may have been driving 60 to 70 miles an hour in the southbound lanes of the expressway south of Northern parkway when the car went out of control on the rainy evening, according to evidence produced by Arrie W. Davis, prosecutor.
     The driver, who was carrying five passengers in the seats and one in the trunk, told police he was going 55 miles an hour in the 50-mile speed zone.

Jumped Median Curb

     Evidence shows that the car hit the median curb, jumped the guardrail, crushed the roof of a northbound car, and struck two other oncoming cars.
     Killed were Susan Nasdor, 16, of the 3700 block Julian court, a passenger in the Freedman car, and Milton Weiner, 47, of the 36 block Blair avenue, driver of the first car struck.
     Speed alone is ordinarily insufficient to prove gross negligence, Judge Sodaro said. He pointed out that there was no evidence of drinking or use of drugs.
      Russell J. White, defense attorney, contended that water on the roadway caused the car to skid, producing a "hydroplane" effect.
     He noted that the concrete highway is being grooved and gouged by engineers at several trouble spots, including the area where the accident occurred.

Without any evidence of drug or alcohol use, I found it very surprising that they charged and tried the driver. It seems to me that the public statements in the previous story by Hugh Liem about the dangers of hydroplaning in that area made the defense's case for them. The verdict was not surprising to me, but I am sure that horrible night was never far from Freedman's mind. 

I was not able to track Jay Freedman with complete accuracy after the trial, but I believe he may have followed Susan Nasdor to the grave in 2004.

Remember, there is a story behind every grave. You never know what you're missing when you walk past one...

Grave Tales:

My novel Chapel Street is now available! You can buy the Kindle and paperback at Amazon and the Nook, paperback and hardcover at Barnes & NobleChapel Street is the tale of a young man battling a demonic entity that has driven members of his family to suicide for generations. It was inspired by an actual haunting. 


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Read about the true haunting that inspired the novel here:

The Haunting of 21 St. Helens Avenue, Part 1, An Introduction
The Haunting of 21 St. Helens Avenue, Part 2, The House
The Haunting of 21 St. Helens Avenue, Part 3, This Is Us
The Haunting of 21 St. Helens Avenue, Part 4, Arrival
The Haunting of 21 St. Helens Avenue, Part 5, Methodology
The Haunting of 21 St. Helens Avenue, Part 6, Clara's Tale, Pt. 1
The Haunting of 21 St. Helens Avenue, Part 7, Clara's Tale, Pt. 2
The Haunting of 21 St. Helens Avenue, Part 8, My Tale, Pt. 1
The Haunting of 21 St. Helens Avenue, Part 9, My Tale, Pt. 2
The Haunting of 21 St. Helens Avenue, Part 10, My Tale, Pt. 3
The Haunting of 21 St. Helens Avenue, Part 11, Natalia's Tale, Pt. 1
The Haunting of 21 St. Helens Avenue, Part 12, Natalia's Tale, Pt. 2
The Haunting of 21 St. Helens Avenue, Part 13, John's Tale, Pt. 1 
The Haunting of 21 St. Helens Avenue, Part 14, John's Tale, Pt. 2
The Haunting of 21 St. Helens Avenue, Part 15, Come Inside!
The Haunting of 21 St. Helens Avenue, Part 16, Marion's Tale, Pt. 1
The Haunting of 21 St. Helens Avenue, Part 17, Marion's Tale, Pt. 2
The Haunting of 21 St. Helens Avenue, Part 18, Jeanne's Tale, Pt. 1
The Haunting of 21 St. Helens Avenue, Part 19, Jeanne's Tale, Pt. 2
The Haunting of 21 St. Helens Avenue, Part 20, Lisa's Tale
The Haunting of 21 St. Helens Avenue, Part 21, Recap, Pt. 1
The Haunting of 21 St. Helens Avenue, Part 22, Recap, Pt. 2
The Haunting of 21 St. Helens Avenue, Part 23, Recap, Pt. 3

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Sunday, July 18, 2021

Yippee-Ki-Yay Mother Podcast #74: Gangster Film Round Robin


Here's another COVID free ZOOM edition of the Yippee-Ki-Yay Mother Podcast, a lively discussion of the movies that sometimes devolves into a group therapy session.

This week we return again to our cinematic round robin format. The genre: Gangster films.  We each brought one of our favorites the table to share with our fellow Mother Podcasters. A lot of fun choices, and some surprising ones too.  Check it out.  

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Thursday, July 15, 2021

Brandi the Bibliophile: Review: Chapel Street by Sean Paul Murphy

Brandi the Bibliophile: Review: Chapel Street by Sean Paul Murphy:   TW: Suicide is mentioned frequently in this novel as are aspects of mental health disorders. Rick Bakos wanted a normal life. After the ...

Wednesday, June 30, 2021

Yippee-Ki-Yay Mother Podcast #73: Fatal Attraction

Here's another COVID free ZOOM edition of the Yippee-Ki-Yay Mother Podcast, a lively discussion of the movies that sometimes devolves into a group therapy session.

In this episode, Podmaster Ralph brings Fatal Attraction to the table. The film has been scaring husbands into fidelity since 1987, but does it still hold up? And, by the way, who is really the villain?  Michael Douglas or Glenn Close? Listen and find out.

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My novel Chapel Street is now available! You can currently buy the Kindle and paperback at Amazon and the Nook, paperback and hardcover at Barnes & Noble.


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